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Class Review

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Class Review

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  1. Class Review <The outside sources information> EW2-047, 13010625, Jiyon Lee

  2. Which one is more reliable? We had been to the moon, and we saw that the Earth is round. My mom said, the Earth is round.

  3. Examples of Very Not Good Sentences. She is not really reliable! 1) My mother said, “Smart phone is very comfortable in people’s life” We need to know how and why. Add such as “it is because they can schedule better, they can communicate with others and they can listen music while cleaning the house.”

  4. What’s her major and renowned for what? What’s her name? 2) According to a professor who is renowned in Sejong University, one person among three is dying after 80 years old. There could be more information. According to a professor Huangwouk Choi, who is renowned as a biologist in SejongUniversity, one person among three is dying after 80 years old because of cancer.

  5. Which major? 3)According to sejong university professor Taeha Lee, by reading classical books, we can became an intellectual. This is pretty vague. We need to define “intellectual”

  6. Examples of Good Sentences What is her occupation? 1)According to a famous psychologist, Sandy Hotchkiss, people who have low confidence tend to be addicted to selfie. -Where does she work? -where and when did she say this?

  7. About this contest – How many times this person has judged 2)According to the judge from Miss Korea contest, I am very beautiful. 3)According to Riot games, which is group of game creators and managers, plyers who constantly blame their teammate lose 40% more games than normal players. More information -Explain about the company - How many games did they research for?

  8. Examples of Excellent Sentences 1)Montreal University research team led by professor Isabelle Peretz said, “Singing song to a crying body is twice as effective as talking, and it can enhance body’s emotion control ability” 2)According to Korea Statistical Information Service, the percentage of old people is increasing since 1980, and finally approaches 13.1% in2015. 3)According to WHO, the level of carcinogen contained sausage and ham is equivalent to cigarette. 4)England’s “think-tank” Legatum laboratory reported that Norway is the best country to live in for 7 years Very Reliable, Clear, and Detailed!!

  9. Today's Homework Choose three of these and try to make a tile. <Cry Baby Players> By Gary According to Riot games, which is group of game creators and managers, plyers who constantly blame their teammate lose 40% more games than normal players.

  10. References • Contents • - Lecture in Gary’s class on November 2, 2015 • The sentences from classmates’ homework • Theme • -Badge in Power Point free template • Images • - Tistory. (2012). The baby picture. Retrieved from http://marke.tistory.com/1462 on November 4th, 2015 • -Voakorea. (2012). The picture of three men with moon. Retrieved from http://www.voakorea.com/content/article/1495757.html on November 4, 2015 • -Minions. Retrieved from • http://kin.naver.com/qna/detail.nhn?d1id=6&dirId=60903&docId=236644323&=66+464uI7Ja4IOyCrOynhA==&enc=utf8&section=kin&rank=2&search_sort=0&spq=1&pid=SBopIspySpsssvTkLIhsssssssh-357516&sid=7vZekRG%2Bg0CbsR9m0larWw%3D%3D on November 4, 2015

  11. Thank you.

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