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Style Lesson 1: Actions

Style Lesson 1: Actions. VERBS. Sentences are stories. Williams suggests that writers think of sentences as stories with characters (subjects) and actions (verbs). Subject verb = doer action.

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Style Lesson 1: Actions

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  1. Style Lesson 1: Actions VERBS

  2. Sentences are stories Williams suggests that writers think of sentences as stories with characters (subjects) and actions (verbs).

  3. Subject verb = doer action Back in elementary school, we learned that the subject of the sentence was the doer of an action and the verb of a sentence was the action. Jane jumps. = subject verb (doer action)

  4. Nouns But the doer doesn’t have to be the subject of a sentence. Any noun can be the subject of the sentence. Jane’s jumping went on and on. Jumping went = subject verb Jane is the doer but jumping is the subject of the sentence.

  5. Verbs More importantly for this lesson, the action of the sentence doesn’t have to be the verb of a sentence. Often the action has been changed into a noun by adding ing, tion, ment, ence, and so on. Jumps becomes jumping

  6. Elegant choice: Go back to elementary school Williams suggests we return to the idea of doers=subjects and important actions=verbs. Even complex academic prose will be more clear and more powerful if we make doers (what Williams calls characters) the subjects of our sentences and if we make actions the verbs of our sentences.

  7. Principle Make the important actions the verbs of your sentence. The director completed a review of the data. Vs. The director reviewed the data.

  8. First draft sentences often have important nouns. Actions become nouns: Discovery is a noun rather than a verb. Resistance is a noun rather than a verb. Reaction is a noun rather than a verb. Flying is a noun rather than a verb. Repair is used as a noun instead of a verb

  9. Nominalization In all the last instances, an action has been changed into a noun. This is called nomilization (“nounalization”). Notice when you have nominalizations in your sentences and see if you can revise the sentence so the noun becomes a verb

  10. The outsourcing of high-tech work to Asia by corporations means the loss of jobs for many Americans. Any nomilazations?

  11. Revise the sentences Change any actions (often found in nomilizations) to verbs The outsourcing of high-tech work to Asia by corporations means the loss of jobs for many Americans. The problem was the topic of our discussion

  12. The results of making actions the verb of the sentence: Your sentences are more concrete and thus more powerful (nominalization results in abstract, vague nouns) Your sentences will be shorter and thus more direct since they will be free of unnecessary verbiage. You sentences will tell a more coherent story.

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