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Making Paragraphs Coherent

Making Paragraphs Coherent. Richardson English 1310. Linking Ideas Clearly. Coherence can be improved by strengthening the ties between old information and new.

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Making Paragraphs Coherent

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  1. Making Paragraphs Coherent Richardson English 1310

  2. Linking Ideas Clearly Coherence can be improved by strengthening the ties between old information and new. Readers expect to learn a paragraph’s main point in a topic sentence early in the paragraph. Then, as they move into the body of the paragraph, the expect to encounter specific details, facts, or examples that support the topic sentence.

  3. Example • A passenger list of the early years [of the Orient Express] would read like a Who’s Who of the World, from art to politics. Sarah Bernhardt and her Italian counterpart Eleonora Duse used the train to thrill the stages of Europe. For musicians there were Toscanini and Mahler. Dancers Nijisky and Pavlova were there, while lesser performers like Harry Houdini and the girls of Ziegfield Follies also rode the rails.

  4. If a sentence does not support the topic sentence directly, readers expect it to support another sentence in the paragraph and therefore to support the topic sentence indirectly.

  5. Example Though the open-space classroom works for many children, it is not practical for my son, David. First, David is hyperactive. When he was placed in an open-spaced classroom, he became distracted and confused. He was tempted to watch the movement going on around him instead of concentrating on his own work. Second, David has a tendency to transpose letters and numbers, a tendency that can be overcome by individual attention from the instructor. (pg 76)

  6. Repeating Key Words • Repetition of key words is an important technique for gaining coherence. • How do you stop dull repetition? • Look at the paragraph on pg 77 and list some of the words Hofstadter repeats. Why would you do this?

  7. Using Parallel Structure • Parallel structures are frequently used within sentences to underscore the similarity of the ideas. • What else are they used for? (pg 77)

  8. Parrallel • Actually, almost every day, even in the most sophisticated home, something is likely to happen that evokes the memory of some old folk belief. The salt spills. A knife falls to the floor. Your nose tickles. Then perhaps, with a slightly embarrassed smile, the person who spilled the salt tosses a pinch over his left shoulder. Or someone recites the old rhyme, “Knife falls, gentleman calls.” Or as you rub your nose you think “That means a letter. I wonder who’s writing?” • --Margaret Mead, “New Superstitions for Old”

  9. Consistency • Coherence suffers whenever a draft shifts confusingly from one point of view to another or from one verb tense to another. • As a rule, a sentence’s subject should echo a subject or an object in the previous sentence. • Look at the paragraph on pg 78 and tell me where you see the coherence occurring.

  10. Providing Transitions • Transitions are bridges between what has been and what is about to be read. • Transitions help readers move from sentence to sentence; they also alert readers to more global connections of ideas. • Sentence-level transitions are certain words or phrases, which signal connections between sentences. • Look at the common transitions on pg 81 and how they connect to the sentence-level transitions on pg 82

  11. Paragraph Breaks • Reasons • To mark intro an conclusion • Signal a shift to a new idea • Shift in time or place • Emphasize a point • Highlight a contrast • Signal change in speakers • A needed pause • Break up texts that looks to dense

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