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The Personal Statement: Strategies for Supporting Students

The Personal Statement: Strategies for Supporting Students. UC Counselor Conference 2007. Overview. Purpose of the personal statement in UC admissions Case study (two parts) New instructions and questions Writing strategies for students Feedback strategies for educators.

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The Personal Statement: Strategies for Supporting Students

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  1. The Personal Statement:Strategies for Supporting Students UC Counselor Conference 2007

  2. Overview • Purpose of the personal statement in UC admissions • Case study (two parts) • New instructions and questions • Writing strategies for students • Feedback strategies for educators

  3. Purpose of the Personal Statement • Part of UC’s comprehensive review process • Opportunity to provide information that supports and augments the review process • Helps readers know and understand applicants

  4. Purpose of the Personal Statement • Adds clarity, depth and meaning to information collected in other parts of the UC application • Completes the application for admission • An admission decision will never be based on the content of a personal statement alone

  5. A Message From UC Faculty • While it is acceptable to receive feedback or helpful suggestions, applicants’ personal statements should reflect their own ideas andbe written by them alone.

  6. Case Study: Part I • Read the personal statement in your binder. • Think about these questions: • What’s important to this applicant? • What qualities/characteristics define this applicant? • Which of these qualities/characteristics is most prominent? • Do these qualities appeal to you? Why?

  7. Instructions and Prompts

  8. Instructions • Two questions • Students respond to both questions. • A maximum of 1,000 words total • Students should stay within the word limit as closely as they can. A little over—1,012 words, for example—is fine. • Students choose length of each response. • If they choose to respond to one prompt at greater length, we suggest the shorter answer be no less than 250 words.

  9. [Freshman Applicants] Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.   [Transfer Applicants] What is your intended major? Discuss how your interest in the field developed and describe any experience you have had in the field — such as volunteer work, internships and employment, participation in student organizations and activities — and what you have gained from your involvement. Prompt #1

  10. Prompt #2 [All Applicants] Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?

  11. Additional Comments • Use Additional Comments box for clarification, expansion on important details: • Additional names • Visa issues • Additional IB exams • (New) Describe anything else that you have not had the opportunity to include elsewhere in your application. • 500-word limit

  12. Writing Strategies for Students

  13. Steps to Writing an Effective Personal Statement Draft, Get Feedback, Revise Develop Topic and Thesis Read Critically Gather Information

  14. College Unknown audience: Students write for a community of scholars. Writer-determined topics: Students choose the topics. Dig deep: Analysis and reflection are key. Personal Statement Unknown audience Writer-determined topics Analytical and reflective response Personal Statement: Writing for College

  15. Important Strategies • Students are encouraged to write about special circumstances that have influenced their educational experience: • Re-entry • Small or alternative learning environments • Learning and/or physical challenges • Veterans • Read critically and write analytically. • Think like an admissions reader by capitalizing on the relationship between readers and writers. • Use a writing process. • Get good feedback.

  16. Think Like an Admissions Reader • All readers have expectations of writers, revealed in readers’ questions, observations and interpretations of the application. • Writers fulfill readers’ expectations by addressing these questions, observations and interpretations in the personal statement. • Writers can anticipate readers’ expectations by completing and critically reading their applications prior to writing a personal statement.

  17. Level one: Facts Level two: Interpretation Level three: Meaning and significance Answers to L1 questions provide details in paragraphs. Answers to L2 questions are topic sentences of paragraphs. Answers to L3 questions are thesis statements of essays. Critical Reading and Analytical Writing

  18. Case Study: Part II • Student Profile: Use the Levels of Questions strategy with this profile. • What data do you find? • What patterns do you see? • What questions would you ask? • What inferences would you draw? • How well does the essay align with the profile? • How would you advise this student to proceed?

  19. Writing Process • Read the application critically using levels of questions. • Draft. • Get feedback — give readers at least a week to respond. • Revise for organization,clarity and meaning. • Proofread.

  20. The Educators’ Role Help students: • Understand the role of the personal statement in the admissions process • Recognize the relationship between reader and writer • Understand the reading and writing tasks of the personal statement • Use a writing process • Obtain appropriate feedback

  21. How to Give Feedback to Students • Request the application and the personal statement, not just the statement. • Ask students to provide you with a list of questions they would like you to answer. • Comment on ideas and the level of persuasiveness, not grammar. • Help students find readers who resemble their target audience.

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