GRAB A LAPTOP!!!! LOG ON! TAKE OUT YOUR PURPLE PACKET for IN-TEXT CITATIONS.

1. GRAB A LAPTOP!!!! LOG ON! • TAKE OUT YOUR PURPLE PACKET for IN-TEXT CITATIONS. • REMINDER: The only “hook” type of quote should be in your 1st intro paragraph. Intros to your sections are BODY PARAGRAPHS and begin with a TOPIC SENTENCE!!!!!

2. MLA in text citation&Song

3. Paragraph1: Intro to section Paragraph2: Subtopic 1 for bks 1&2 Paragraph3: Subtopic 2 for bks 1&2 Paragraph4: Subtopic 3 for bks 1&2 Paragraph1: Intro to section Paragraph2: Book 1 Paragraph3: Book 2 Formatting Section 1

4. The Quote Can’t Stand Alone(To the tune of “The Farmer in the Dell”) • The Quote Can’t Stand Alone • The Quote Can’t Stand Alone • All Quotes need signal phrases and citations to call home. Signal Phrase (followed by , or : NOT A PERIOD.) "Quote" (Citation).

5. Using Signal Phrases USE COLON : When signal phrase is a complete sentence! Example: Hamilton examines Huxley’s attitude toward war: “Quote.” USE COMMA , When signal phrase is an incomplete phrase! Example: Beetz states in his article, “Quote.”

6. In- text Citation examples • Kirk Beetz, professor of English at Harvard University, states in his article, “Overcoming Adversity,” that there are “many obstacles that society as a whole faced in the 18th century” (23). • Beetz also claims, “Gender roles were subverted in many of Austen’s novels” (24). • The lack of submission in Austen’s novels show how “gender roles were subverted” (Beetz 24). • Remember, only PRINT sources have page numbers! • Joan DeMarco, author of “Patriarchal Societies in the 17th Century” states, “Father figures controlled the household.”  (no page for web source, period inside!)

7. Block Quote (for quotes over 4 lines on your page) Broderick also discusses the importance of having a solid relationship with a paternal figure:  (note the colon) Begin your quote here without any quotation marks. The entire blocked quote should be indented on the page. The citation follows the quote after the period. (1046)  (note I did not repeat the author’s name because it’s in my signal phrase. If this was a WEB source, I would be done after the period!) Continue your paragraph here.

8. When you have 2 sources by the same author, you must cite WHICH ONE of the 2 you are referring to. • William Nance observes that “there are multiple ways for the characters to attain their identities” (“Loss of Identity in Capote’s Major Works” 34). • The narrator states, “He preferred freedom with the pirates over bare escape from hanging” (Stevenson, Treasure Island 212). • You don’t need to cite the article or title if you only have ONE by that author.

9. Due Friday!! • Edited Intro with Section 1 • YOU WILL START LOSING POINTS FOR MLA FORMATTING. • YOU WILL LOSE POINTS FOR DROPPED QUOTES. • You don’t need to use ALL the quotes in your Quote Outline. You need at least your 2 primary quotes (one from each book) and as many secondary quotes as you feel necessary. (The examples we read had 5-8 quotes.)