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Practice of English Composition

Practice of English Composition. 영작문 연습. Prof. Shao Guangqing shaoguangqing@gmail.com. Contents. Unit 1 Paragraph to short essay Part 1 The paragraph Review of paragraph structure Topic sentence Part 2 Unity and coherence Unity within a paragraph Coherence within a paragraph.

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Practice of English Composition

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  1. Practice of English Composition 영작문 연습 Prof. Shao Guangqing shaoguangqing@gmail.com

  2. Contents • Unit 1 Paragraph to short essay • Part 1 The paragraph • Review of paragraph structure • Topic sentence • Part 2 Unity and coherence • Unity within a paragraph • Coherence within a paragraph

  3. Part 1 The paragraph • Review of paragraph structure • Topic sentence

  4. Is this a good paragraph? I live in a house in west Provo. I like the view from our house. We have lived there since November. We also have a car that I like very much. We were in an accident a few months ago. We hit a deer that was crossing the street at night. I felt sorry for the deer, but it cost a lot of money to repair the car.

  5. Is this a good paragraph? My husband and I bought our first house last November, and we love it. It is located in west Provo near Utah Lake. Although we cannot see the lake from our house, we do have a beautiful view of Mount Timpanogos. Our house has three bedrooms, two bathrooms, a living room, and a large kitchen and dining area. We also have a large backyard and a small garden. We are very happy to own our own home, and I hope that we will live there for several years.

  6. Review of paragraph structure • A paragraph is a group of sentences _____________. • A typical paragraph begins with a _____________. • The __________________ that follow support the topic with explanations, reasons, and other details. • The __________________ brings the paragraph to an end. about a topic topic sentence supporting sentences concluding sentence

  7. Review of paragraph structure indent margin double spacing

  8. Topic sentence topic Certain types of insects can benefit a garden. controlling idea

  9. Are they effective topic sentences? Why? • Smoking is bad. • Idea too general for a topic sentence • There are approximately 4,000 chemicals in cigarette smoke. • Fact, not topic sentence • The topic sentence must not be a simple fact or detail; instead, it must contain a specific idea. The idea or opinion must not be too general, or the topic sentence will be unclear.

  10. Practice: identifying effective topic sentences • 1. ___ a. An English-English dictionary is the best choice for English learners. ___ b. Many English learners use dictionaries. • 2. ___ a. The grains of rice should not stick together. ___ b. Persian rice is only considered authentic if it is made in the following way. TS TS

  11. Practice: identifying effective topic sentences • 3. ___ a. The internet has changed the way students do research for term papers. ___ b. The internet is changing students’ lives. • 4. ___ a. A college degree is important. ___ b. Having a college degree has many positive effects on a person’s life. TS TS

  12. The function of topic sentence • The topic sentence implies the purpose of the paragraph: to explain, narrate, compare, describe, tell cause or effect, demonstrate or argue, or tell steps in a progress. • My sister’s personality is completely different from mine. • Smoking results in thousands of smoking-related deaths each year. Showing comparison telling cause and effect

  13. Practice: identifying purpose in topic sentences • 1. Almost anyone can get a good grade if they follow these instructions. a. express an opinion b. tell steps in a process c. narrate a story • 2. There are three major causes of obesity in children. a. compare two subjects b. explain cause/effect c. describe a topic

  14. Practice: identifying purpose in topic sentences • 3. I will always remember a fishing trip that I took with my father when I was 12 years old. a. compare two subjects b. explain cause/effect c. narrate a story • 4. I believe that students should not own credit cards. a. tell steps in a process b. explain cause/effect c. express an opinion

  15. Practice: identifying purpose in topic sentences • 5. Owls are different from hawks in several significant ways. a. compare two subjects b. describe a topic c. express an opinion • 6. My dog, Sparky, is my best friend. a. tell steps in a process b. describe a subject c. narrate a story

  16. Practice: writing effective topic sentences 1. Topic sentence: I have an older brother.

  17. Practice: writing effective topic sentences 2. TS: Many students eat a lot of fast food. Students eat a lot of fast food Students eat a lot of fast food for several reasons. for several reasons. reasons why students eat a lot of fast food

  18. Practice: writing effective topic sentences 3. TS: There is a beach near my house. a beach near my house When I want to be alone to think, I visit a beach near my house. I visit the beach when I want to be alone a description of the beach

  19. Practice: writing effective topic sentences 4. TS: Many teenagers go shopping. Many teenagers Many teenagers spend too much time shopping. spend too much time shopping an opinion of whytoo much shopping is bad for teenagers

  20. Practice: writing effective topic sentences 5. TS: Hurricanes hit Florida every year. Hurricanes Hurricanes cause much damage to property in Florida every year.. hit Florida every year the effects ofhurricanes in Florida

  21. Part 2 Unity and coherence • Unity within a paragraph • Coherence within a paragraph

  22. Recognizing unity in supporting sentences • Read the following topic sentences. Put a check (√) next to each sentence below that supports the topic sentence.

  23. Recognizing unity in supporting sentences • 1. There are several reasons why online courses are increasing in popularity. ___ a. Online courses are flexible in terms of time. ___ b. Online courses have been available since the 1990s. ___ c. Online courses are more convenient for students who live far away from the campus. √ √

  24. Recognizing unity in supporting sentences • 2. Childhood diabetes has many possible causes. ___ a. Obesity is a major cause of diabetes. ___ b. Children who eat too much sugar can get diabetes. ___ c. Children with diabetes need constant medical care. √ √

  25. Recognizing unity in supporting sentences • 3. The best way to reduce traffic in our city is to build a metro subway system. ___ a. Pollution is very bad in our city. ___ b. Widening the freeways has not solved the problem of traffic congestion. ___ c. A metro subway system would encourage people to take public transportation to work. √ √

  26. Recognizing unity in supporting sentences • 4. I am afraid of dogs because I had a scary experience with one when I was ten. ___ a. My children are not allowed to have a pet dog. ___ b. My neighbor owned a collie dog that ran around the neighborhood without a lease. ___ c. The dog bit me. √ √

  27. Recognizing unity in supporting sentences • 5. Scenic Beach is my favorite picnic spot because of its beauty. ___ a. It is a quiet narrow beach covered with oyster shells. ___ b. One time I had an interesting experience there. ___ c. The Olympic Mountains rise straight up out of the water on the other side of the channel. √ √

  28. Unity within a paragraph unity • Effective writing must have _______. A paragraph has ______ when all the sentences support one single idea. • The paragraph must have one ________ in the topic sentence. Otherwise, the paragraph loses focus. • The ___________________ must support, demonstrate, prove, or develop the main idea in the topic sentence. • The ___________________ should restate the idea in the topic sentence to reinforce the main idea for the reader. unity controlling idea supporting sentences concluding sentence

  29. Practice: editing for unity • Read the paragraph, find out 4 sentences that are irrelevant to the topic. The pelicans

  30. Practice: editing for unity I love to watch the pelicans in Galveston. I usually go in the winter. The weather is not warm enough for swimming, so I usually do not see many people on the beach. Pelicans are not elegant, but they are interesting to watch. They remind me of prehistoric birds from my school textbook on dinosaurs. I studied dinosaurs a lot when I was young, and I am very fond of them. The pelicans have large grayish-brown wings that bend sharply when they flying, and their beaks are long, so their faces look peculiar and old. I love to watch the pelicans in Galveston. I usually go in the winter. The weather is not warm enough for swimming, so I usually do not see many people on the beach. Pelicans are not elegant, but they are interesting to watch. They remind me of prehistoric birds from my school textbook on dinosaurs. I studied dinosaurs a lot when I was young, and I am very fond of them. The pelicans have large grayish-brown wings that bend sharply when they flying, and their beaks are long, so their faces look peculiar and old.

  31. Practice: editing for unity My brother also really likes pelicans. They are also graceful in their own way. A flock of pelicans will fly along the coastline just outside the waves, and when they see a good fishing spot, they stop, then turn and dive straight down into the water. Sometimes there is an oil rig or a cargo ship in the water, too. Sometimes several pelicans will fish in the same spot for a while before moving down the beach and away from sight.

  32. Practice: editing for unity I love to watch the pelicans in Galveston. I usually go in the winter. The weather is not warm enough for swimming, so I usually do not see many people on the beach. Pelicans are not elegant, but they are interesting to watch. They remind me of prehistoric birds from my school textbook on dinosaurs. I studied dinosaurs a lot when I was young, and I am very fond of them. The pelicans have large grayish-brown wings that bend sharply when they flying, and their beaks are long, so their faces look peculiar and old. I love to watch the pelicans in Galveston. I usually go in the winter. The weather is not warm enough for swimming, so I usually do not see many people on the beach. Pelicans are not elegant, but they are interesting to watch. They remind me of prehistoric birds from my school textbook on dinosaurs. I studied dinosaurs a lot when I was young, and I am very fond of them. The pelicans have large grayish-brown wings that bend sharply when they flying, and their beaks are long, so their faces look peculiar and old.

  33. Practice: editing for unity My brother also really likes pelicans. They are also graceful in their own way. A flock of pelicans will fly along the coastline just outside the waves, and when they see a good fishing spot, they stop, then turn and dive straight down into the water. Sometimes there is an oil rig or a cargo ship in the water, too. Sometimes several pelicans will fish in the same spot for a while before moving down the beach and away from sight.

  34. THANK YOU

  35. Developing unity • Write two or three supporting sentences for each of the following topic sentences.

  36. Developing unity • 1. Joining a sports team can provide many benefits. • ________________________________ • ________________________________ __________________________________ Team members can have fun. Team members can enjoy meeting new people.

  37. Developing unity • 2. My first day in my new school was full of surprises. • ________________________________ • ________________________________ __________________________________ I met interesting, new people. My teacher taughtdifferently from teachers at my old school.

  38. Developing unity • 3. A road trip is the best way to see the United States. • ________________________________ __________________________________ • ________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ Travelers can explore small towns and scenicareas. The roads are well maintained and thereare many hotels,campgrounds, and restaurantsavailable.

  39. Developing unity • 4. Many people do not realize that packing a suitcase requires skill and planning. • ________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ • ________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ First, you need to think about what you will needwhen you arrive at your destination. Second, youshould pack so that when you need a particularitem you can access it easily.

  40. This paragraph is organized according to a. Time order b. Spatial order c. Order of importance For people who would like to act in the theater, there are several important rules to remember. • One rule, often forgotten, is to make sure you face your audience when you are on stage. • Next, make sure that you speak loudly enough. • Another important point is to memorize your lines. • Finally, perhaps the most important rule of all is to remain calm on stage if you forget your lines.

  41. Coherence in a paragraph • _______ in a paragraph means that the ideas have a logical flow: the relationship between the sentences is clear and one idea connects to the next. One way to achieve coherence in a paragraph is to use a pattern of organization, such as ___________, ___________, or ______________________. Coherence Time order Spatial order Order of importance

  42. Reordering for coherence • See P. 14: Exercise 8 • Read the sentences from a narrative paragraph. Some of the sentences are out of order. Number the sentences from 1-10 to show logical time order.

  43. Reordering for coherence • __1__ b. I will never forget one day when I had to travel alone on the subway. • __2__ c. I was pregnant, and I had to go to an appointment at the hospital. • __3__ f. My appointment was at 1:00 p.m. • __4__ d. When my appointment ended, I got on the subway to go home. • __5__ h. I was exhausted and fell asleep on my way home.

  44. Reordering for coherence • __6__ g. Suddenly, I looked up and did not know where I was. • __7__ i. Then I realized that I had fallen asleep. • __8__ e. That was why my surroundings looked unfamiliar. • __9__ j. It took me five more hours to get back to my home. • __10__ a. My family hugged me and cried because I had been gone so long.

  45. THANK YOU

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