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In your introduction you need to name all four poems and relate them to the question.Now write your introduction, beginning with this sentence:
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1. Look at Havisham and 3 other poems. Compare how the poets treat the theme of revenge.
3. Similarly, My Last Duchess is unlike Havisham for the narrator also acts on his anger and kills his wife for revenge. The poem Kid could be seen as more similar to Havisham as Robin also has revengeful thoughts about Batman being sad and alone, and the action that he takes is nowhere near as violent as in The Laboratory and My Last Duchess. His revenge is more emotional than physical.
4. Now you need to write your second paragraph. Focus on Havisham and The Laboratory, discussing how the poets use of emotive language conveys confused feelings of love, hurt and anger and how this leads to thoughts of revenge.
Make sure you use an example from the text and analyse.
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5. When you bring in another poem, use a compare/contrast sentence opening such as:
This is similar to
We also see this in Brownings poem...
Talk about how The Laboratory uses similar violent language, making sure you use examples for comparison.
6. The opening line of Havisham, Beloved sweetheart bastard is a very powerful oxymoron, which highlights how she hates him but she is still in love with him. This is similar to Kid because although Robin hates Batman, the way that he still thinks about him, and thinks about getting back at him, shows that deep down he really still cares for him. The violent and emotive language in The Laboratory is very similar to the language in Havisham. In the The Laboratory violent verbs such as mash, burn, bite, and the use of assonance in the poem, emphasise the anger of the narrator and how she has her mind set on one thing.
7. Now move on to considering how the desire for revenge affects the women, focusing on their similar loss of femininity. Remember to use phrases which introduce textual references and back up your points:
This is highlighted by the phrase
The poet emphasises this idea by using the repeated image of...
8. The line Spinster. I stink and remember highlights her obsession, as it shows how thinking of her ex has taken over her femininity and dignity she no longer thinks about her appearance as she knows no-one else will want her. This again could be compared to The Laboratory because the womans mind becomes so filled with malice and revenge that she seems to lose her femininity. This is highlighted when she starts to imagine taking poison in delicate accessories such as an earring. Items which usually symbolise femininity become instruments of death.
10. You are now going to bring in My Last Duchess and will find more points of contrast than comparison. Use sentences which introduce these differences:
Unlike Havisham, we see a different tone in the narrators language ...
In contrast...
However, in My Last Duchess...
Try to incorporate the quotations you use within your sentences. Focus on how the Dukes language is cold and he shows far less emotion than we see in Havisham.
11. Unlike Havisham which is a powerful and emotive poem, My Last Duchess uses very cold and detached language. In this poem the narrators revenge is driven more by power and pride than by the upset and anguish of Havisham. The narrator displays disgust that she ranked my gift of a nine-hundred year-old name with anybodys gift which shows the Dukes arrogant character.
13. Now relate this back again to Havisham, showing that you can compare the two effectively.
Use the starting sentence,
This attitude to revenge contrasts starkly with Havisham, who...
14. This attitude to revenge contrasts starkly with Havisham who speaks passionately and at times erotically about her lover and arguably would even have him as a corpse. Like the opening oxymoron, the image of wanting a corpse for a honeymoon highlights Havishams confusion. She still loves him and has sexual desires for him, yet at the same time she revengefully wishes he was dead.
15. Refer back to My last Duchess, linking with the other poem you have discussed in detail, The Laboratory.
Comment on how these poems are similar because of the lack of remorse for the revenge taken.
16. The way that the Duke freely tells of how he had his last wife killed, and the clear message he sends that he will do it again, is similar to the way the narrator of The Laboratory shows no remorse about killing her lovers mistress.
Both Brownings narrators seem powerful and convinced of their right to revenge; the Duke because of his injured pride and that he chooses, never to stoop, the jilted lover because of the way her man was ensnared and stolen away from her.
17. Finally, refer to your last poem Kid starting by linking it with My Last Duchess as this will follow on from your previous paragraph.
Discuss how the theme of power and revenge is addressed in Kid
Start with the sentence;
The sense of power and control in My Last Duchess is reflected in Kid because in this poem Robin takes his revenge by becoming stronger and revelling in the fact that Batman is now a nobody.
18. This is shown from the phrase Big shot; it highlights Robins jealousy and anger at living in Batmans shadow. It also has an element of sarcasm because of the image we get of Batman at the end of the poem. Here the hero is reduced to a lonely man stewing over chicken giblets. The way that Robin uses clichés and phrases from his former life, Holy-robin-redbreast... shows how he does still think about and care for Batman because he is throwing his words back at him.
19. Now link your points back to the essay title and the poem named in the question, Havisham.
Try to discuss the paradox of both love and hate that we see in these two poems.
Start with the sentence:
The paradox in the poem of Robin not wanting to live in Batmans shadow but being upset about being ditched is like Havisham because...
20. ...although she hates her ex and wants to take revenge on him, she still loves him. This is like Robin as he takes pleasure in thinking about Batman as a miserable and lonely old man. He tells us he has grown up and moved on, yet the immature way he lingers on his revenge and too earnestly assures us of his now being The real boy wonder, demonstrates that actually he is ironically still a Kid.
21. Finally, conclude your essay, bringing together all 4 poems and focusing clearly on the question again.
Begin with the sentence:
The way that Robin takes pleasure in thoughts of revenge is like The Laboratory...
22. The way that Robin takes pleasure in thoughts of revenge is like The Laboratory, in which the narrator gleefully looks forward to seeing her ex lover suffer and seeing his mistress die. Brownings Duke, on the other hand, appears to take no pleasure in the revenge which he has so chillingly already exacted. His nineteenth century portrayal of a single minded dominant male is more like Dickens one dimensional Miss Havisham than her modern and passionate counterpart.