After you organize your introduction, how do you organize the rest of your essay?

1. After you organize your introduction, how do you organize the rest of your essay?

2. In this lesson you will learn how to organize the body of your essay by using boxes and bullets.

3. Preparing to write 1 2 3 4 Research a topic Generate a big research question Write your thesis statement Outline your essay How did mistakes cause some battles of the Civil War to begin? Some battles of the Civil War were caused by mistakes.

4. Information web Introductory outline Attack on Fort Sumter Battle at Ball’s Bluff How did mistakes cause some battles of the Civil War to begin? Some battles of the Civil War were caused by mistakes. • The Attack on Fort Sumter was caused by a mistake. • Soldier mistakes caused the Riot in Baltimore. • Soldiers started the Battle at Ball’s Bluff by accident. Riot in Baltimore

5. Leave the introductory outline behind

6. 1 • Make each bullet of your introduction a box in the body organizer. 2 • Add supporting details from your notes as bullets under the boxes. 3 Count the bullets to see where you need to go back and look for information.

7. 1 • Make each bullet of your introduction a box in the body organizer. Introductory outline Body outline Some battles of the Civil War were caused by mistakes. The Attack on Fort Sumter was caused by a mistake. • The Attack on Fort Sumter was caused by a mistake. • Soldier mistakes caused the Riot in Baltimore. • Soldiers started the Battle at Ball’s Bluff by accident. Soldier mistakes caused the Riot in Baltimore. Soldiers started the Battle at Ball’s Bluff by accident.

8. 2 • Add supporting details from your notes as bullets under the boxes. Information Web Body outline Attack on Fort Sumter Battle at Ball’s Bluff 1 The Attack on Fort Sumter was caused by a mistake. How did mistakes cause some battles of the Civil War to begin? • Northern fort on Southern land. • Only 82 soldiers protected the fort. • Union ignored orders, entered S. land. • Thought trees were enemy tents. • Stayed and were discovered by S. • N. soldiers died in many different ways. 2 Soldier mistakes caused the Riot in Baltimore. Riot in Baltimore 3 Soldiers started the Battle at Ball’s Bluff by accident. • North was attacked while passing through Baltimore.

9. 2 • Add supporting details from your notes as bullets under the boxes. Information Web Body outline Attack on Fort Sumter Battle at Ball’s Bluff 1 The Attack on Fort Sumter was caused by a mistake. How did mistakes cause some battles of the Civil War to begin? • Northern fort on Southern land. • Only 82 soldiers protected the fort. • Union ignored orders, entered S. land. • Thought trees were enemy tents. • Stayed and were discovered by S. • N. soldiers died in many different ways. Northern fort on Southern land. Only 82 soldiers protected the fort. Riot in Baltimore • North was attacked while passing through Baltimore.

10. 2 • Add supporting details from your notes as bullets under the boxes. Information Web Body outline Attack on Fort Sumter Battle at Ball’s Bluff 2 Soldier mistakes caused the riot in Baltimore. How did mistakes cause some battles of the Civil War to begin? • Northern fort on Southern land. • Only 82 soldiers protected the fort. • Union ignored orders, entered S. land. • Thought trees were enemy tents. • Stayed and were discovered by S. • N. soldiers died in many different ways. North was attacked while passing through Baltimore. Riot in Baltimore • North was attacked while passing through Baltimore.

11. Body outline The Attack on Fort Sumter was caused by a mistake. • Northern fort on Southern land. • Only 82 soldiers protected the fort. Soldier mistakes caused the Riot in Baltimore. • North was attacked while passing through Baltimore. Soldiers started the Battle at Ball’s Bluff by accident. • Union ignored orders, entered S. land. • Thought trees were enemy tents. • Stayed and were discovered by S. • N. soldiers died in many different ways.

12. 2 • Add supporting details from your notes as bullets under the boxes. Information Web Body outline Attack on Fort Sumter Battle at Ball’s Bluff 3 Soldiers started the Battle at Ball’s Bluff by accident. How did mistakes cause some battles of the Civil War to begin? • Northern fort on Southern land. • Only 82 soldiers protected the fort. • Union ignored orders, entered S. land. • Thought trees were enemy tents. • Stayed and were discovered by S. • N. soldiers died in many different ways. Union ignored orders, entered S. Land. Thought trees were enemy tents. Stayed and were discovered by S. N. Soldiers died in many different ways. Riot in Baltimore • North was attacked while passing through Baltimore.

13. 3 • Count the bullets to see where you need to go back and look for information. The Attack on Fort Sumter was caused by a mistake. Do I have enough information? • Northern fort on Southern land. • Only 82 soldiers protected the fort. Soldier mistakes caused the Riot in Baltimore. • North was attacked while passing through Baltimore. Soldiers started the Battle at Ball’s Bluff by accident. • Union ignored orders, entered S. land. • Thought trees were enemy tents. • Stayed and were discovered by S. • N. soldiers died in many different ways.

14. 1 • Make each bullet of your introduction a box in the body organizer. 2 • Add supporting details from your notes as bullets under the boxes. 3 Count the bullets to see where you need to go back and look for information.

15. In this lesson you have learned how to organize the body of your essay by using boxes and bullets.

16. Use the introductory outline below to outline the body of the essay using the boxes and bullets on the next slide. The lifecycle of mosquitos consists of four stages. • Eggs are the first stage of the mosquito life cycle. • Second, mosquitos go through the larva stage. • The next stage of the life cycle is the pupa stage. • The last stage of the cycle is the adult stage.

18. Review a body outline you have created. • Count the bullets to see where you need to add more information. • Go back to your texts and find additional information. • Add the information to your outline.

19. If you were to review a partner’s body outline, how could you tell if your partner was ready to begin drafting? • What details would you look for that would show that your partner was ready? • What warning signs would tell you that your partner wasn’t ready?

20. Work Backwards! • Look at a completed student essay. • Try to create the boxes and bullets outline that the writer used by searching for the main ideas and details in each paragraph.

21. Use one of your introductory outlines and your research notes to outline the body of the essay using boxes and bullets.

22. Lesson Slides Rubric Use this rubric to ensure your lesson plan is great!

23. Writing Lesson Rubric

26. Graphic and Image Templates Copy and Paste items from these slides to make your presentation look great!

27. You can copy and paste these items into any slide Green text box that appears letter by letter Green text box that fades in Blue text box that appears letter by letter Blue text box that fades in Red text box that appears letter by letter Red text box that fades in

28. You can copy and paste these items into any slide—make sure you copy both the bubble and the text! Do I feel strongly about it? Do I have a lot to say? Do I have a lot to say? Do I have a lot to say? Do I feel strongly about it?

29. You can copy and paste these items into any slide. You can resize them as needed! Use black text when you write in me please! Also, keep my text left-justified rather than centered! Use black text when you write in me please! Also, keep the text left-justified rather than centered!

30. All arrows can be recolored by changing the “shape fill.” You can also resize them or rotate them!

31. You can use these when discussing main ideas or steps in a process… 1 [Write first step here…] 2 [Write second step here…] 3 [Write third step here…]

32. You can resize any of these boxes and use them to highlight text or ideas.

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