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Authors: Hannes Tschofenig Dirk Kroeselberg. Security Threats for NSIS (draft-ietf-nsis-threats-01.txt). Comments. John (and I) asked a number of working group members to submit their comments to the draft. Thanks for the large number of comments. They helped to improve the document.
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Authors: Hannes Tschofenig Dirk Kroeselberg Security Threats for NSIS(draft-ietf-nsis-threats-01.txt)
Comments • John (and I) asked a number of working group members to submit their comments to the draft. • Thanks for the large number of comments. • They helped to improve the document.
Update • Restructuring of threats Categories: a) Generic Threats b) Signaling specific Threats Hence other restructuring proposals have been rejected.
Update • Deployment Threats Initial intention: Pointing to some issues which might cause problems for deployment Unfortunately many readers found them confusing. => I removed them.
Update • Introduction / End-to-End security Comments: • Too restrictive • Outside the scope of the threats document => Rewritten
Update • Editorial comments / ID formatting issues Hopefully i have corrected them all without adding new errors.
Update Some comments could not be incorporated: • Examples • Add more examples to make it easier for the reader to understand the text. • Based on previous comments i have removed as many examples as possible from the text. • Hence I will not add examples. • Requirements within the draft • Security requirements can be found in the requirements draft.
Next steps • Please read the draft. • Last call already started. • Comments are welcome!