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Introduction. Long Essay (Level 1) ORGANIZATION. Body 1. Body 2. Conclusion. / mhl , March 25, 2014. Introduction. Hook/general idea (optional). Everyone needs someone special in their lives. Topic. My best friend is Zeinab.
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Introduction Long Essay (Level 1) ORGANIZATION Body 1 Body 2 Conclusion /mhl, March 25, 2014
Introduction Hook/general idea (optional) Everyone needs someone special in their lives. Topic My best friend is Zeinab. She is a student at Zayed University. She is the daughter of my father’s brother, so that means she is my cousin. Background info Zainab is a beautiful person with many appealing qualities, and she has a positive influence on me. Thesis Paragraph topics This intro is 51 words
Introduction Long Essay (Level 1) general topic Body 1 topic background thesis Body 2 topic Body 1 Body Body 2 Conclusion
Introduction Long Essay (Level 1) hook topic Body 1 topic Body 1 topic background thesis Body 2 topic Body 2 topic Body 1 Body Body 2 Repeat topic/thesis suggestion, future hope no new details Conclusion
Body Paragraph topic sentence (TS) details examples Supporting Sentnces (SS) explanation description concluding sentence (CS)
My cousin Zeinab is my best friend because she is lovely inside and outside. She teaches me to be a better person 1. Repeat topic/thesis Body 1 topic Body 2 topic I am a little sad because we go to different schools now, but I hope someday soon we will spend more time together. 2. opinion, suggestion, hope for future Conclusion Neveraddnew details This conclusion is 45 words
Topic sentence (TS) Mariam is a lovely person with a great personality. Supporting (SS) sentences: Details and examples She has big blue eyes and shiny black hair. She likes to wear make-up, but really she does not need that because she is naturally beautiful. Also, her personality is outgoing and warm, and she is very helpful. For example, if you ask her for help with your homework, she will never refuse. Concluding sentence She will always be beautiful, I know.
Topic sentence (TS) Mariam is an active influence on me. Supporting (SS) sentencs: Details and examples Supporting (SS) sentences: Details, examples…. Transition words (also, fore example, in addition) For example, I love shopping with her because she can always make a good decision. Also, Mariam listens to me, and if she doesn’t understand me right away, she will try again the next day. Concluding sentence I always enjoy doing things with Mariam and learning from her.
Conclusion 1. Repeat thesis My cousin Zeinab is my best friend because she is lovely inside and outside. She teaches me to be a better person. Body 1 topic Body 2 topic 2. opinion, suggestion, hope for future I am a little sad because we go to different schools now, but I hope someday soon we will spend more time together. No new details
Introduction Long Essay (Level 1) hook topic Body 1 topic Body 1 topic background thesis Body 2 topic Body 2 topic Repeat topic/thesis suggestion, future hope no new details Conclusion
Introduction Topic sentence 1 Body Topic sentence 2 Topic sentence 3 In summary, ... Conclusion