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parallelism. Parallelism. Parallelism refers to the use of grammatically equal elements in sentences and paragraphs . Parallelism can be viewed as a matter of balance. When elements are balanced (parallel), the result is clear and smooth;
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Parallelism • Parallelism refers to the use of grammatically equal elements in sentences and paragraphs. • Parallelism can be viewed as a matter of balance. • When elements are balanced (parallel), the result is clear and smooth; • when they are not balanced, the result is awkward and confusing.
rules • For parallel structure, balance nouns with nouns, prepositional phrases with prepositional phrases, participles with participles, infinitives with infinitives, clauses with clauses.Not parallel: Our report covers the details of the plan and how much it costs.Parallel: Our report covers the details of the plan and its costs.
To emphasize and clarify parallel structure, repeat a preposition, an article, the to in an infinitive, or the introductory word of a phrase or clause:> The problem lies not in the plan itself but in the method of execution.> We are pleased that you have accepted our proposal and that you will be working with us on this important project.> We are writing to clarify our position, to prevent possible misunderstandings, and to establish a foundation for cooperation.
Use parallel structure with correlatives: either . . . or; neither . . . nor; not only . . . but also; whether . . . or; both . . . and.Not parallel: Whether at home or when at work, he was always busy.Parallel: Whether at home or at work, he was always busy.Not parallel: This is not only unclear but it is wordy as well.Parallel: This is not only unclear but also wordy.
Parallelism is also necessary in lists. The following list, for example, is NOT parallel. • The objectives of this course are: > To review the rules of grammar. > Examining methods of developing essays. > How to do a research paper. • The objectives of this course are as follows: > To review the rules of grammar. > To examine methods of developing essays. > To learn how to do a research paper.
Practice: correct the following. • Phuong Tran has wit, charm, and she has an extremely pleasant personality. • We must either raise revenues or it will be necessary to reduce expenses. • Examples of aerobic exercises are distance running, swimming, cycling, and long walks. • Annie's dress was old, faded, and it had wrinkles. • Consuming too much of a fat-soluble vitamin can be as harmful as not to consume enough.
answers • Phuong Tran has wit, charm, and a pleasant personality. • We must either raise revenues or reduce expenses. • Examples of aerobic exercises are distance running, swimming, cycling, and walking. • Annie's dress was old, faded, and wrinkled. • Consuming too much of a fat-soluble vitamin can be as harmful as not consuming enough.