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Please take out your English notebook, your copy of the book, and write down today’s learning target. Discussion day!. Learning target : Construct argumentative paragraph.
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Please take out your English notebook, your copy of the book, and write down today’s learning target Discussion day! Learning target: Construct argumentative paragraph “The loneliest moment in someone’s life is when they are watching their whole world fall apart, and all they can do is stare blankly.” ~ F. Scott Fitzgerald, The Great Gatsby 4/23/14
Agenda 4/23/14 • Bellwork • Discussion Homework: • Bring in all your project extras (including interview questions) to be checked in class on Friday, April 25th(work day in Lab 200 on Thursday)
Bellwork 4/23/14 • What was important or meaningful about Holden’s visit with Phoebe?
Paragraph • Write one paragraph answering the question, “What, if anything, is wrong with Holden?” • Support your paragraph with multiple pieces of evidence (at least one direct quote with page number) Paragraph structure help: • Claim: The sentence stating your overall argument to address the question being asked • Context: Setting up your quote, saying what’s happened before it • Concrete Detail: A quote or a specific action/event explained in detail • Commentary: Explain the quote’s meaning or purpose, and analyze how it supports your claim
Discussion • Write a question or observation about these last chapters on an index card
If your paper is a redo • Read over the rubric comments from RD #2, and look over your comments on the final draft. Did you address all of those concerns between drafts? • (I wrote very few notes on actual final draft, because I wrote A TON on the RD#2) • Know what to do to fix the last issues? Do it! Get it back to me ASAP. • Don’t know how to address the issues? Talk to me to make an appointment to chat one on one about your paper.