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Sample paragraphs: My Favorite Person.
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I know a lot of people think that there granmother is special, but I would be surprized to find any as special as mine. My granmother takes care of me when my mother is at work. My granmother comes to my apartment and she waches me. My granmother has a special name for me. She calls me Dolly. She says that when I was a little baby I looked just like a doll. The most important thing about my granmother is that she tells me about things that happened before I was a live. She is a good story teller so it’s easy for me to listen to her. I know if you met my granmother she would mean a lot to you too. Paragraph 1
Is there a strong topic sentence? What is the topic sentence? What is the concluding sentence? What makes it a good concluding sentence? What details are included to develop the topic?
I like Molly she is nis and she likes cats. She plays with me and she lives nere me. We wuk to the parc and we slid on the slid and we eat choclat because Molly likes choclat. Me too. Paragraph 2
What is the topic sentence? Does it introduce the topic well? What details are included? Do the details support the topic? Is there a concluding sentence? What would a good concluding sentence be? What changes could be made to make this paragraph better?