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Agenda 7 – 8 October 2013. Prayer & Pledge Attendance and SSR Show, don’t tell! “Father and Son”. Act of Love . O my God, I love you above all things, With my whole heart and soul, Because you are all-good and worthy of all love. I love my neighbor as myself for the love of you.
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Agenda 7 – 8 October 2013 Prayer & Pledge Attendance and SSR Show, don’t tell! “Father and Son”
Act of Love O my God, I love you above all things, With my whole heart and soul, Because you are all-good and worthy of all love. I love my neighbor as myself for the love of you. I forgive all who have injured me, And I ask pardon of all whom I have injured. Amen.
Homework Complete “Father and Son,” if not finished in class Answer questions 1-5 in AIR (pg 636 – “Reading Check”) Complete vocabulary words from “cowered” through “rebuke” in The Odyssey (“Father and Son” and “The Suitors” – words found in AIR glossary only. Study vocabulary words from “The Sirens,” “Scylla & Charybdis” and “Cattle of the Sun God – VOCABULARY TEST NEXT CLASS! Bring SSR & AIR Reminder: sign up for your book chat!!! Any day after school between now and 10/18!!
Let’s compare… “Then an old lady came out of the room and screamed.” VS “Sarah’s weight was on her cane as she made her way out of the room. Her eyes flew open when she saw the floor and her chin began to quake. ‘Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!’ she cried, at the top of her lungs.”
Using dialogue to show events: My mom wouldn’t stop asking me about coffee. She was embarrassed that I didn’t have any to offer Aunt Gloria. I told her to forget the coffee. I explained that I needed her to send me twenty dollars. I told her I needed to leave. She told me that my job painting curbs was good and that I had told her I made good money. I told her I was serious and that I really needed the money. I told her I wanted to come to stay with her for a few weeks. VERSUS
“Forget the coffee! I need you to send me twenty bucks. I gotta get out of this place!” “But you gottagood job doing the curbs like you do,” she said. “You say it’s really good money.” “Mom, this is serious,” I yelled. I need money now! I want to stay with you for a couple of weeks.” - Gary Soto’s Buried Onions
Excellent Dialogue: • reveals personality traits • reveals conflict • reveals characters’ feelings toward each other • includes gestures, facial expressions, and body language • is properly punctuated & formatted
Showing: Emotions through description Sally was very sad. VS Sally slumped down into her chair. Her elbows clapped against her desk and her head fell into her hands. Her shoulders began to shake and I could hear her quietly sobbing.
Showing versus Telling Practice Telling:Showing: • I am creative. 1. • She/Hewas inspirational. 2. • It was snowing. 3. • My friend was angry. 4. • I won the race. 5. • I am the leader. 6.
Father and Son Page 631 FOR DISCUSSION: • How will Telemachus react to his father’s return? • Will Odysseus be able to resolve problems at home? • Into what does Athena transform Odysseus? • How does Odysseus prepare Telemachus for the plan?
Homework Complete “Father and Son,” if not finished in class Answer questions 1-5 in AIR (pg 636 – “Reading Check”) Complete vocabulary words from “cowered” through “rebuke” in The Odyssey (“Father and Son” and “The Suitors” – words found in AIR glossary only. Study vocabulary words from “The Sirens,” “Scylla & Charybdis” and “Cattle of the Sun God – VOCABULARY TEST NEXT CLASS! Bring SSR & AIR Reminder: sign up for your book chat!!! Any day after school between now and 10/18!!