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isabelle ingenuous deftly changed the subject before a argument ensuedi dread going back to horribly hard middle school for another year she groaned i dislike all the teachers except msamicable artist and idont want to be laughed at by orsonodious and his stuck up freinds she concluded yes im with you isabelleconcurredsam sagacious with fervor but we also need to curb william and his limericks doesnt he know any other form of poetry. would other types of poetry have the same effect on the teachers he queried further always curious Nine Extra Credit Points: Correct the “Caught Ya!” error, define the seven bold words, underline an interrogative sentence. Passage 7.6
Indent paragraph x2 • New topic • New speaker • Capitalize the first word of a sentence x6 • Capitalize proper nouns x15 • End punctuation x7 • Run-On sentences x8 • Separate into 2 sentences • Separate with comma and conjunction • Separate with semi-colon • Punctuation inside quotation marks x4 • Capitalize proper pronoun (I) x3 • Apostrophe in contraction x3 • Period for abbreviation (Ms.) • Spelling Error: ie, ei (friend) • Comma to set off mild interjection (Yes,) • Commas to set off noun of address • Question mark for interrogative sentences x2 ¶Isabelle Ingenuous deftly changed the subject before a argument ensued. “I dread going back to Horribly Hard Middle School for another year,”she groaned. “I dislike all the teachers except Ms.AmicableArtist,and I don’t want to be laughed at by Orson Odiousand his stuck-up friends,”she concluded. ¶“Yes,I’m with you, Isabelle,”concurredSam Sagacious with fervor, “but we also need to curb William and his limericks. Doesn’t he know any other form of poetry?Would other types of poetry have the same effect on the teachers?”he queriedfurther. • Extra Credit: • Add an extra check to the Caught Ya! error if you got it right on your own. • Vocabulary • deftly(adv.) dexterously; nimbly; skillfully; cleverly • ensue, ensued (v.) to follow in order; come afterward, especially in immediate succession • amicable(adj.) characterized by or showing goodwill; friendly; peaceable • odious(adj) causing hatred; hateful; detestable • concur, concurred (v.) to be in accord;to agree • fervor (n.) great warmth and earnestness of feeling; ardor, passion, zeal • query, queried (v.) to ask or inquire; to question • Underline an interrogative sentence. Passage 7.6 Errors: 52