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“I’m sorry I didn’t think it mattered.”. It was only a tenner. He forgot my birthday. I didn’t think she’d notice. They weren’t supposed to know. Why shouldn’t I? Which one matters most? Put them in order. “I’m sorry I didn’t think it mattered .” Writing a short story.
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“I’m sorry I didn’t think it mattered.” • It was only a tenner. • He forgot my birthday. • I didn’t think she’d notice. • They weren’t supposed to know. • Why shouldn’t I? • Which one matters most? Put them in order.
“I’m sorry I didn’t think it mattered.”Writing a short story • What does a short story need? • Select the ingredients from the list below. • setting • denouement/ solution • dialogue/ people talking • climax/ high point • description • dilemma/ problem • plot Give reasons for your choices.
“I’m sorry I didn’t think it mattered”Writing a short story • Now put your chosen ingredients in an order you think makes sense. • No plan your ideas around those ingredients. • Setting: an old people’s home • Description: of one particular old lady and her life • Dilemma: She’s senile and doesn’t know how much money she has, so wouldn’t miss a few pounds • Dialogue: Between thief and nurse who discovers the theft • Climax: whether or not the thief will be reported to the police. • Denouement: returning the money with the promise to spend more time with the old lady instead.
AO3ii organise information and ideas into structured and sequenced sentences, paragraphs and whole texts, using a variety of linguistic and structural features to support cohesion and overall coherence • Setting out dialogue: true or false • if a new character speaks, it’s on a new line • if a character speaks they don’t need speech marks • if a character speaks they should have no punctuation in what they say • if a character speaks it should be clear who is speaking and how they’re speaking