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Class Review EW2-035 14010227 An Young Eun
Beginning of Class Beginning of Class Last class assignment – Bring 3 outside sources • Classify each sources into • not good, good, and excellent • Standard : reliable & informative
Not Good Sources Not Good Sources <Example> • CIA is largest US spy agency, according to black budget leaked by Edward Snowden. • CIA is largest US spy agency, according to black budget leaked by Edward Snowden. • CIA is largest US spy agency, according to black budget leaked by Edward Snowden, the man who confirmed leaking top secret details about U.S. surveillance programs. ⇒ much informative
Not Good Sources Not Good Sources <Example> • According to Wilkins Kennedy, last year there were approximately 67,500 personal bankruptcies across all age groups in England and Wales. • According to Wilkins Kennedy, (off-setting information), last year there were approximately 67,500 personal bankruptcies across all age groups in England and Wales. • According to Wilkins Kennedy, a top 30 firm of Chartered Accountants and Business Advisers, last year there were approximately 67,500 personal bankruptcies across all age groups in England and Wales. • ⇒ Explain person or thing with specific details
Good Sources Good Sources <Example> • History professor in Sejong University said, “Humanism is the most important thing in Renaissance.” What’s his/her name? • History professor in Sejong University said, “Humanism is the most important thing in Renaissance.” Good, but vague • Jungmin Lee, a history professor in Sejong University, said, “Humanism is one of the important philosophies in Renaissance.”
Good Sources Good Sources <Example> • My mom said, who watches weather forecast everyday, “It will be rainy today.” • My mom said, who watches weather forecast everyday, “It will be rainy today.” • My mom, who watches weather forecast everyday, said, “It will be rainy today.” • ⇒ ‘said,’ has to go right before double quotation mark
Good Sources Good Sources <Example> • According to KISDI, instagram has grown 23% for two years. • According to KISDI, instagram has grown 23% for two years. ⇒ identify organization’s full name previously (even though everyone knows it) ⇒ explain specifically where it has grown • According to Korea Information Society Development Institute, instagram has grown 23% in Korea for two years.
Excellent Sources Excellent Sources <Example> • According to National Statistical Office, 1067 baby boys were born for every 100 baby girls in 2010. • TRD, the theory of rebuying decision, which was published by Professor Heesup from Sejong University, is suggesting that satisfaction leads to customer’s rebuying. • Korea Medical Accommodation announced that drinking 2L of water a day helps in deep sleep. ⇒ specific, reliable, and informative The Readers has Zero Knowledge!
Today’s Class Today’s Class • Off-setting information • Make titles for 2 sources from the examples
REFERENCE • http://cafe.naver.com/icimc/4544 • https://www.wikijob.co.uk/wiki/wilkins-kennedy • EW2-035 class students
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