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Revise and Edit Review. Revise. a dd a detailed sentence to a paragraph a dd a beginning sentence a dd a conclusion to the paper c ombine sentences. Revise. add a beginning sentence A good beginning sentence is like a hook or a lead. It is the first sentence that
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Revise • add a detailed sentence to a paragraph • add a beginning sentence • add a conclusion to the paper • combine sentences
Revise • add a beginning sentence A good beginning sentence is like a hook or a lead. It is the first sentence that introduces the reader to the information or story.
Revise • add a detailed sentence A detailed sentence could be added to a paragraph at the beginning, end, or after a specific sentence #.
Revise • add a concluding sentence A good concluding sentence is the ending. The sentence shows the paper is finished.
Revise • Combine sentences What is the best way to combine sentences 1 and 2? • Texas is a fun place to live. (2) Even though it is boiling hot most of the year.
Edit Think about… C = Capitalization U = Usage ex. there/their is /are P = Punctuation ex. . ? ! , “ “ don’t S = Spelling
Edit • The babys were crying loudly during the thunderstorm.
Edit (2) I couldnt hear what the teacher said because a student was screaming.
Edit (3) My friend’s party was the best one of the year.
Edit (4) Last night, I watched the Klein Oak basketball game. (5) Then I go to TuttiFrutti for a cool treat.