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Run-On Sentences and Comma Splices. Brendan Curtin Chelsea Beabout Shrekka La’Vette. What Is A Run-On Sentence?. Independent clauses that have not been joined correctly An independent clause is a word group that can stand alone Ex: Santa Claus is a jolly man.
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Run-On Sentences and Comma Splices Brendan Curtin Chelsea Beabout Shrekka La’Vette
What Is A Run-On Sentence? • Independent clauses that have not been joined correctly • An independent clause is a word group that can stand alone • Ex: Santa Claus is a jolly man. • Ex: Dasher is the best reindeer. • Ex: Rudolf has a red nose. • Run-on sentences are often compound sentences • Compound sentences are composed of two or more independent clauses. • There are two types of run-on sentences • Fused • The Comma Splice
Fused Run-On Sentence • A fused run-on Sentence is when a writer puts no mark of punctuation and no coordinating conjunctions between independent clauses. • Coordinating conjunctions: “FANBOYS” • A fused run-on sentence can be fixed with the use of a comma and a coordination conjunction. • Ex: My cat lost her ball I don’t know where. • Ex: I forgot to water the plant it wilted. • Ex: My parakeet was hungry he didn’t have any food.
Other ways to fix a fused sentence • With a period • Ex: The pen was out of ink I got a new one. The pen was out of ink. I got a new one. • With a semicolon • Ex: The pencil broke I sharpened it The pencil broke; I sharpened it. • Add a subordinating conjunction and a comma to make one of the clauses dependent • Subordinating conjunctions: because, although, if, when, after, while, until, before, since, as, unless, whereas • Ex: The bottle was empty I recycled it. Because the bottle was empty, I recycled it. • A dependent clause is a group of words that cannot stand alone. • Ex: Although Superman is strong
The Comma Splice Run-On Sentence • Two or more independent clauses joined with a comma but without a coordinating conjunction. • Ex: Chelsea likes to eat cookies, she made them because she likes them. • Ex: Brendan hates sugar cookies, however, he will eat the cookies for the sake of the presentation. • Ex: Shrekka likes blue icing, icing is very sweet, Shrekka likes sweet things.
Work Citations • Hacker, Diana. Rules for Writers. 6th ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2009. Print. • Longknife, A. & Sullivan K. The Art of Styling Sentences. 4th ed. Hauppauge/New York, 2002. Print.