2011 届高考英语二轮书面表达提高、升格及分类训练课件

1. 2011届高考英语二轮书面表达提高、升格及分类训练课件2011届高考英语二轮书面表达提高、升格及分类训练课件 2011届高考英语二轮书面表达提高、升格及分类训练课件

2. 一　提高作文必背句型

3. 背诵下列语句 常用文章开头的句型： 1．It is well­known that....众所周知，……。 2．There is no doubt that....毫无疑问，……。 3．Some people claim that....有人认为……。 4．It is generally believed that....普遍认为……。 5．It is widely accepted that....普遍认为……。 6．Currently there is a widespread concern over...现在，人们普遍关注 的问题是……。 7．With the rapidly growing popularity of..., the quality of our lives has been considerably changed.随着……的快速普及，我们的生活质量 已经发生了极大变化。

4. 8．With the development of..., an increasing number of people come to realize that...随着……的发展，越来越多的人意识到……。 9．Now people in growing numbers are coming to realize that...正在越来 越多的人逐渐意识到……。 10．Some people think that.... To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 有人认为……，坦率地说，我不同意 他们的观点，理由如下。 11．For years, ... has been seen as ..., but things are quite different now. 多年以来，……一直被看着是……，但现在情况大不一样了。 12．Last week, we made/conducted/carried out a survey about...上周， 我们做了一项关于……的调查。

5. 13．Recently we have had a discussion over...最近我们讨论了……这 个问题。 14．According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.依照最近的一项调查，每年有 4 000 000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。 15．The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭 作业没什么好感。

6. 常用于文章正文的句型： 1．People’s views on...vary from person to person.人们对……的观点因 人而异。 2．As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.”常言道，“事物 都是一分为二的。” 3．As a proverb says, “No pains, no gains”．俗话说，“不劳则无获。” 4．Contrary to the popular thought, I prefer....与普遍的想法正相反，我 更喜欢……。 5．I cannot entirely agree with the idea that .... I believe….我不完全赞 同这样的一个观点……，我认为……。 6．There is no denying the fact that...不可否认，……。 7．Before giving my opinion, I think it is essential to look at the argument of both sides.在提出我自己的观点之前，我们有必要了解正反双方争 论的焦点。

7. 8．It is high time that we placed great emphasis on the improvement of...到了改进……的时候了。 9．It is high time that we put an end to...到了结束……的时候了。 10．There is no easy solution to the problem of..., but...might be useful. 对……这一问题，没有轻松解决的办法，但……或许有所益处。 11．It is essential that effective measures should be taken to prevent the situation.有必要采取有效措施来阻止形势进一步恶化。 12．It is suggested that great efforts should be made to control the growth of...建议尽力控制出……的增长。 13．It is hoped that great efforts should be focused on...人们希望 在……方面做出努力。

8. 常用于文章结尾的句型： 1．From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that....根据上述讨论，我们可以得出结论，……。 2．Taking into account all the factors, we may safely come to the conclusion that....考虑到各个因素，我们可以得出结论，……。 3．Judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely arrive at/reach the conclusion that....根据所提供的证据来判断，我们可得出结论，……。 4．All the evidence supports a sound conclusion that....所有证据都支持这 样一个结论，……。 5．To sum up, we find that....总之，我们认为……。 6．In short/brief/conclusion/a word, ....简言之，……。

9. 表达个人观点的句型： 1．As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.就我个人而言，我赞同第二个观点。 2．As far as I am concerned, I am really/completely in favor of the policy.就我个人而言，我完全支持这项政策。 3．In my opinion/view, we should....我认为我们应该……。 4．As for me, I．...至于我，我……。 5．From my point of view, ....我认为……。 6．Personally, I think....我个人认为……。 7．My view is that....我的观点是……。 8．I hold a negative/positive view of....我对……持反对/肯定态度。

10. 9．Contrary to generally accepted views, I argue that...与普遍的观点 相反，我认为……。 10．It would be natural to think that..., but it would be absurd to claim that...人们很自然地认为，……，但据此就以为……却是很愚蠢的。11．At first thought, it may seem an attractive idea, but on second thought, we find that...乍一看，这个观点很有吸引力，但再一想， 我们发现……。

11. 图表作文常用句型： 1．The table/diagram/graph shows/describes/reflects that....该图表表明/ 描述/反映了……。 2．As is shown in the chart, ...has been on the increase/decrease.此图表 表明，……一直在增加/减少。 3．According to the figures given by the graph, the number of...has been rising steadily.从图表给出的数据看，……的数量在稳步增长。 4．The data/figures lead us to the conclusion that....这些数据可以让我 们得出这样的结论，……。 5．As is shown/exhibited in the diagram/graph/table，....正如图表中所 展现的那样，……。

12. 6．It is clear/apparent from the table/diagram/figures that....该图表清楚 地表明，……。 7．A, which accounts for...%, ranks the first; next in line is B with...%, followed by C, making up...%; finally D, E, F at...%，...% and...% respectively.A占了……%，位居第一，第二位是B，占……%，接 下来是C，占……%，最后是D、E、F，分别占……%……%…… %。

13. 翻译下列句子 1．不用说早睡早起是值得的。 ___________________________________________________________ 2．我深信预防胜于治疗。 ___________________________________________________________ 3．在各种运动中，我尤其喜欢慢跑。 ___________________________________________________________ 4．时间最珍贵是很容易证明的。 ___________________________________________________________ 5．就我所知，下列方法对我帮助很大。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours. I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure. Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular. It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than time. As far as my knowledge is concerned, the following ways are of great help to me.

14. 6．毫无疑问，近视在我国的年轻人中是一个严重的问题。6．毫无疑问，近视在我国的年轻人中是一个严重的问题。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 7．根据我个人经验，微笑已带给我许多好处。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 8．在我的求学过程中，我忘不了学习英文所遇到的大困难。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 9．随着台湾经济的快速发展，许多社会问题产生了。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ There is no doubt that near­sightedness is a serious problem among the youth of our country. According to my personal experience, smile has done me a lot of good. In the course of my schooling. I will never forget the great difficulty I encountered in learning English. With the rapid development of Taiwan’s economy, a lot of social problems have come out.

15. 10．在这信息的年代，计算机扮演非常重要的角色。10．在这信息的年代，计算机扮演非常重要的角色。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 11．世上没有什么比到快餐店吃汉堡更令我高兴的。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 12．我们保持公共场所清洁是应当的。 ___________________________________________________________ 13．每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪，我就忍不住感到悲伤。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ In this age of information and communication, the computer plays an extremely important role. Nothing in the world can delight me so much as having hamburgers in fast­food restaurants. It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean. Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad.

16. 14．一般相信阅读增加我们的知识、扩大我们的心胸。14．一般相信阅读增加我们的知识、扩大我们的心胸。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 15．青少年犯罪的主要理由是社会环境日益败坏。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 16．俗话说得好：诚实为上策。 ___________________________________________________________ 17．人们学外语有三个理由。 ___________________________________________________________ 18．为了维护健康，我们每天至少可做三件事。 ___________________________________________________________ It is believed (that) reading increases our knowledge and broadens our mind. The main reason why the juveniles commit crimes is that social environment is becoming worse. As an old saying goes, “Honesty is the best policy.” People learn a foreign language for three major reasons. To keep healthy, there are at least three things we can do every day.

17. 19．我们生活需要有规律。也就是说，早睡早起，戒除烟酒。19．我们生活需要有规律。也就是说，早睡早起，戒除烟酒。 __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ 20．基于这个理由，我已决定把行医作为未来的职业。 __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ 21．事实上，健康才是最重要的。 __________________________________________________________ 22．此外，我们不应忽视每个人都想要一个温馨祥和的社会。 _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ We need to live a regular life. That is, we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking and drinking in the daily activities. For this reason, I have decided to take practicing medicine as my future career. As a matter of fact, it is health that counts. In addition, we should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.

18. 23．相反，少数学生似乎还在鬼混。 ___________________________________________________________ 24．政府应严格执法，另一方面，大众也应该培养减少污染的好习惯。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 25．换言之，我会尽最大的努力完成我的目标。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 26．从此之后，我已发现微笑是日常生活中避免冲突的最好办法。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ On the contrary, a few students, it seems, are still fooling around. The government should enforce laws strictly. On the other hand, the public also should develop the good habit of reducing pollution. To put it differently, I will try my best to attain (gain, live up to) my goal. Ever since then, I have found smile is the best way to avoid any possible conflicts in our daily lives.

19. 27．更严重的是，我们不珍惜野生动物。 __________________________________________________________ 28．做这些简单之事，我们一定可以快乐出门平安回家。 _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ 29．唯有通力合作，我们才能期望台湾不久有新的面貌。 _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ 30．最后，但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助长青少年犯罪的原因。 _________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ What is more serious is that we do not cherish the wildlife. By doing these simple things, we surely can go out of the door happily and come back home safe every day. Only with combined efforts can we expect Taiwan to take a new face in due course. Last but no least, the shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency.

20. 31．总而言之，好国民应该遵守交通规则。 ___________________________________________________________ 32．因此，我们能下个结论，那就是世上自由最珍贵。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 33．如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问，我们就能精通英语。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 34．根据一项调查，中国学生半数以上患有近视，位居世界第一。 ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ In conclusion, a good citizen should abide by traffic regulations. We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as freedom in the world. If we can do as mentioned above, there can be no doubt that we can master English. According to a survey, more than half of Chinese school children are short­sighted, ranking first in the world.

21. 35．中国在世界上人口最多，占到了20%，其次是印度，占到17%。35．中国在世界上人口最多，占到了20%，其次是印度，占到17%。 China has the largest population of the world, which accounts for about 20%,followed by India, making up about 17%.

22. 记住下列模板 模板1：一般信件 Dear ________， I arrived safely back in ________. Thanks again for all your help and kindness during my stay in ________. You really made sure I had a safe and enjoyable time. I hope you are well and everything is fine with you. Unfortunately, I have a very small favor to ask. ________(事情描述). ________(必须做的原因). I wonder if you would mind ________. Of course, I will happily ________(你的回报). ________(事情应怎样做). Thanks in advance. Yours, Li Hua

23. 模板2：求职信 Dear ________， I have learnt from yesterday’s newspaper that you are employing a/an ________. I wish to be considered as an applicant for the position, and beg to state my qualifications as follows: I am ________ years old, a senior student of ________ University, majoring in ________. During my academic years, I have shown excellent performance and have been awarded first­class scholarship each year. In addition to my educational background, I have the rich work experience in the fields of ________. Therefore, I believe I can be of value to your company. Enclosed is my resume for your reference, and I shall be glad to call at your office if you desire an interview. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua

24. 模板3：观点对比 The topic about ________ is becoming increasingly popular in our school. There are two sides of opinion about it. Some students prefer to consider ________ (做某事). (Some students say ________ is their favorite.) They think that ________ (理由一). What’s more, ________ (理由二). Moreover, ________ (理由三). However, others believe ________ is a better choice for three reasons. To begin with, ________ (理由一). Next, ________ (理由二). In addition, ________ (理由三). From my point of view, the former is surely a wise choice. The reason is that ________ (As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that ________.)

25. 模板4：解决方法题型 In recent days, we have to face a serious problem that ________. First, ________(说明问题的现状)．Second, ________(举例进一步说明 现状). Confronted with the problem, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ________(解决方法 一). For another, ________(解决方法二). Finally, ________(解决方法 三). Personally, I believe that ________(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________(带 来的好处)．

26. 模板5：说明利弊题型 Nowadays many people prefer ________ (某事物) because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ________(优点之一). Besides, ________(优点之二). But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ________(缺点一)．To make matters worse,________(缺点二). Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ________(我的看 法)．

27. 模板6：图表作文 As is shown by the figure in the table, ________ has been on the rise/ decrease. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that ________. There are at least two good reasons accounting for ________. On one hand, ________. On the other hand, ________ due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for ________. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing. As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that ________. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well­grounded.

28. 模板7：话题作文 Nowadays, there are more and more ________ in ________. It is estimated that ________. Why have there been so many ________？ Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first reason is that ________. Besides, ________. The third one is that ________. To sum up, the main cause of it is due to ________. It is high time that something had to be done about it. For one thing, ________. For another, ________. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of ________.

29. 二　快速升格你的作文

30. 使用高级词汇 1.常用到的高级词汇 例如： “此外”：addition, furthermore “同样地” in the same way→ likewise, similarly, equally, in comparison “然而”however→ in contrast, on the other hand, on the contrary “因为”because of→ due to, owing to, on account of, thanks to, as a result of “虽然”though/although→ despite the fact that, in spite of the fact that “总之” in a word/in short/all in all→in brief, in summary, to sum up, to summarize, to conclude “现今”today/now→ nowadays, currently “同时”should→ be supposed to

31. “有时候”sometimes→occasionally 又如： be interested in→ be crazy about/be absorbed in very good→ perfectly good most of...→ the majority of... be made up of→ consist of as/so ong as→ on condition that try one’s best to do...→ spare no effort to do... grow fast→ grow rapidly / grow amazingly fast 再如： Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. →An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house Thank you very much for you help.→ We appreciate your help very much. Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. →Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.

32. 2.用短语代替单词 例如： As a result, the plan was/turned out to be a failure. She went to Austria to study/for the purpose of studying music. Because the weather was good/Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. She can’t correctly pronounce/has trouble pronouncing the word.

33. 使用复杂结构 1.改变语态 People suggest that the conference be put off.(一般) It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级) 2.使用不定式 He is so kind that he can help me.(一般) He is so kind as to help me.(高级) 3.使用过去分词 She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(一般) Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.(高级) 4.使用V­ing形式 When he arrives, please give me an e­mail.(一般) On arriving/his arrival, please give me an e­mail.(高级)

34. 5.使用名词性从句 It disappointed everybody that he didn’t turn up.(一般) The fact that he didn’t turn up disappointed everybody.(高级) 6.使用定语从句 The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.(一般) The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.(高级) 7.使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句 ①Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.(一般) It was not until 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began. (高级) ②Though I’m weak, I will make the effort. (一般) Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. (高级) ③We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing well. (一般) How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well! (高级)

35. 添加过渡语 1.表示时间、顺序关系的过渡语 for one thing, for another, shortly afterwards, after that, firstly, secondly..., then, next, finally, eventually, in the end 2.表示递进、强调关系的过渡语 besides, furthermore, what’s more, in addition, moreover, worse still, to make matters worse, indeed, certainly, surely, above all, as well 3.表示转折关系的过渡语 but, yet, however, nevertheless, in spite of, otherwise, while, after all 4.表示对比关系的过渡语 on the contrary, instead of, on one hand...on the other hand, just like, unlike, in the same way, at the same time, meanwhile

36. 5.表示解释、说明关系的过渡语 namely (也就是), actually, such as, for example, for instance, that is to say, in other words, and so on, to tell you the truth, according to this

37. 使用套语 1.陈述原因 1)There are three reasons for this. 2)The reasons for this are as follows. 3) There are three reasons that account for this phenomenon. 例如：There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved. Secondly，most people are well paid, and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.

38. 2.陈述重要性、必要性、可能性或困难 1)It is important(necessary，difficult，convenient, possible)for sb.to do sth. 2)We think it necessary to do sth. 3)It plays an important role in our life. 例如：Computers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business.Soon, computers will be found in every home，too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.

39. 3.陈述变化 1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years. 2)A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications. 3)The computer has brought about many changes in education. 例如：Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek. Nowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.

40. 4.提出方法措施 1)We should take some effective measures. 2)We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties. 3)We should do our utmost in doing sth. 4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with. 例如：The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore we must take some effective measures to solve it.

41. 5.进行比较 1)Compared with A，B... 2)I prefer to read rather than watch TV. 3)There is a striking contrast between them. 例如：Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable.Firstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly，they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least，they contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical exercise.

42. 使用谚语 1.The true value of life is not in what we get but in what we give. 人生的 价值不在于索取，而在于奉献。 2.Life is not all roses. 人生并非处处鸟语花香。 3.If winter comes, can spring be far behind？冬天来了，春天还会远吗？ 4.All roads lead to Rome. 条条道路通罗马。 5.It is never too late to mend. 亡羊补牢，为时未晚。 6.Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 7.Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日建成。 8.Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。 9.Well begun is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。

43. 10.Strike while the iron is hot. 趁热打铁。 11.He laughs best who laughs last. 笑在最后，笑得最好。 12.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 13.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真交。 14.Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。 15.All that glitters is not gold. 发光的未必都是金子。 16.A man is known by the company he keeps. 观其交友，知其为人。 17.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍，聪明的 孩子也变傻。 18.Easier said than done. 说来容易做时难。 19.It’s never too late to learn. 活到老，学到老。 20.Opportunity knocks at the door only once. 机不可失，时不再来。

44. 满分作文欣赏 1 作文题目： 美国中学生Jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。 注意：词数不少于120。

45. 满分作文： My name is Li Hua and I am writing to introduce myself to you and let you know more about your upcoming stay in China. My family and I are very excited to have you come to stay with us! I am a student at Hongxing Middle School where you will also be studying. We will be able to ride our bikes to school together every day and I can introduce you to many activities available on campus such as ping­pong, basketball and soccer. There’s a large dining hall on campus for lunch. The meals there are very delicious and a good introduction to Chinese food.

46. At our house, you will have your own bedroom and bathroom. My mom and dad hope you will have a comfortable stay here. An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.We look forward to welcoming you to China and our home. Please let me know if you would like to know anything else before you arrive. Kind regards, Li Hua

47. 亮点分析： 文章涵盖了四幅图画的所有内容要点，使用了较复杂的语法结构和较高级的词汇，没有任何语法错误。段落划分合理，内容条理，结构紧凑。语言地道，如upcoming stay, come to stay with us, many activities available, a good introduction to等。复杂语法结构，如where you will also be studying, look forward to welcoming you to China等。

48. 2 作文题目： 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有 意应聘，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。 表示感兴趣 说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历 希望得到回复 注意：词数不少于120。 满分作文：

49. Dear Sir or Madam, I am in the ninth grade at Xinhua Middle School. My English teacher told me that your magazine is looking for part­time reporters. I believe I have the right skills and enough motivation to take on the job. I worked as a volunteer at the Common Wealth Games in Australia last spring. Therefore, I had experience of working in English and interacting with people with different backgrounds. In fact, I made friends with people worldwide. I also had a chance to practice team abilities. When I came back to China, I wrote a front­page story about my trip for our school newspaper. I stand out among my peers by keeping a strong interest in learning things beyond my textbooks. By reading newspapers daily, I am able to follow the important events and discuss them with parents or classmates.

50. I would be very happy to show you my published story if I have an opportunity for an interview. Thank you for your time! Sincerely, Li Hua