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5 th Group Sample Of R elation Letter. By : Riza Umami FTR. Yans Nur Afifah Mega Listra. Sample of Custom Relation Letter. 29th March 2013 Tom Atkinson COMANY Inc. 14 Edith Street, Hackney West Dear Tom Atkinson
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5th Group Sample Of Relation Letter • By : RizaUmami FTR. YansNurAfifah Mega Listra
Sample of Custom Relation Letter 29th March 2013 Tom Atkinson COMANY Inc. 14 Edith Street, Hackney West Dear Tom Atkinson Call it nostalgia, if you wish, but as I was glancing over some of the accounts we have had for several years, I stopped when I arrived at the name of Fashionable corp. It has been a long time since our very first transaction was initiated, and it is with a great sense of pride that I realize how far both of our firms have come since that day so many years ago. The fact that our relationship has not only lasted, but has flourished over this period of time, is most rewarding. Thank you for the past, for the present, and may the future be a continuance of that which was established on 4th april 2000. Very truly yours, Tony Montana
The date 29th March 2013
The Inside Address Tom Atkinson COMANY Inc. 14 Edith Street, Hackney West
The Salutation Dear Tom Atkinson Call it nostalgia, if you wish, but as I was glancing over some of the accounts we have had for several years, I stopped when I arrived at the name of Fashionable corp. The Opening
The Main Context It has been a long time since our very first transaction was initiated, and it is with a great sense of pride that I realize how far both of our firms have come since that day so many years ago. The fact that our relationship has not only lasted, but has flourished over this period of time, is most rewarding.
Thank you for the past, for the present, and may the future be a continuance of that which was established on 4th april 2000. Very truly yours, Tony Montana Thanking and closing Complimaentary close
explanation • This letter is about how to make a good relation between two company which may have been cooperate before, now or for their future. • In this letter they will make a good sentence (persuasion, recall the past, etc) so they will build a good image for their co-worker.
The Missing Part • Heading Reason: Maybe, because they put the heading on the envelope. But, actually they should put the heading on the top of the letter. • The Reference Reason: Because on the complimentary close part they already put the name of the sender. But actually they should put the reference clearly with the address, phone number, email, etc. So, the one who get the letter didn’t doubt about the existence of the letter.
Unfamiliar Word • Glancing : Sekilas • I stopped when I arrived. • The fact that our relationship has not only lasted, but has flourished over this period of time, is most rewarding.
This letter is include to the external business letter. Because this letter is about recall the past relation and make a relation again.