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EDITING an

EDITING an. ARTICLE. ‘ That idea liked me so much .’. I liked the idea so much. I thought it was an amazing idea. I really liked the idea. ‘ When I’m playing a match I lose sense of reality ’ ‘ I found playing the guitar like a way to disconnect yourself from real life ’

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EDITING an

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  1. EDITING an ARTICLE

  2. ‘That idea liked me so much.’ • I liked the idea so much. • I thought it was an amazing idea. • I really liked the idea.

  3. ‘When I’m playing a match I lose sense of reality’ ‘I found playing the guitar like a way to disconnect yourself from real life’ ‘It is a way to distract from the world’ • When I’m playing a match I get away from it all. • I found playing the guitar a good way to get away from it all.

  4. ‘I realized how useful it [Internet] was when I paid for Internet service’ • I realized how useful it was when I installed Internet on my computer. • I realized how useful it was when I got Internet service.

  5. ‘Those days the Internet was like ‘empty’ because I didn’t know what to do in there.’ • In those days the Internet was a mystery for me because I didn’t know what it was really for. • In those days the Internet was puzzling for me because I didn’t know what it was used for.

  6. ‘One year ago I decided to do a course to learn how to handle properly with computers’ • One year ago I decided to take up a computing course to make the most of my computer. • One year ago I decided to take up a computing course to learn how to use it properly.

  7. ‘I recommend to everyone as a hobby.’I really recommend playing any sports as a hobby.’ • I recommend playing sports as a hobby to everyone. • I highly recommend taking up any sport as a hobby.

  8. ‘I stopped going to the club because it was specially for boys from 6-12 years old.’ • Once you are 13 you cannot play there anymore • I stopped going to the club because I was 13 and they only let kids under 12 enter/play.

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