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Part II: First Body Paragraph. Justifying Artifacts. Objectives/goals. Content : I will be able to justify how my subject artifact personally represents me. Language : I will use the language of JUSTIFY/EVALUATE/ and TRANSTION WORDS to discuss and write with my group and in my paper.
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Part II: First Body Paragraph Justifying Artifacts
Objectives/goals • Content: I will be able to justify how my subject artifact personally represents me. • Language: I will use the language of JUSTIFY/EVALUATE/ and TRANSTION WORDS to discuss and write with my group and in my paper. • Social: I will respectfully collaborate with my group in the computer lab.
Brainstorm • Design a thinking map that can classify every class and an artifact that can represent you. • Does anyone know of a map that can organize our justification paragraphs?
TPS – Think, Pair, Share • Have students share their artifacts with each other… just in case they want to change them.
Formatting Paper • Double Space • 12 point font • Times New Roman • One space after periods • Margins: 1 inch on each side • Indent the first sentence of your paragraphs (5 spaces) • Students information is on the LEFT hand side: • Language Arts Teacher’s Name: Mrs. Valverde • Science/Period: 5/Mr. Bryns • Bob Imaginary • Title of the paper is “Science Justification Paragraph”
After considering all the obstacles you overcame in your introductory paragraph justify why your favorite artifact represents who you are. • Choose one of the language frames to start your first topic sentence of your body par.: • *All things considered throughout my 8th grade year, I feel that my _______ project best justifies me in my Language Arts class. • *With this 8th Grade Exit Portfolio project in mind, I feel that my _______project best justifies who I am in my Language Arts class.
Second Sentence: • Explain to your reader what your project is. • The project I chose was about ______________________.
Third-Seventh Sentence: • Explain to your reader/interviewer what you did your in project in detail. Use the FOURtransition words below to organize your sentence structure: DO NOT FORGET COMMAS AFTER YOUR TRANSITION STATEMENTS or WORDS (ex. At first, I had to pre-cut …..) Transition Words to choose from: -at the beginning, immediately, first, before, -secondly, also, and, and then, another, besides, but also, equally important, furthermore, further, in addition, in fact, likewise, moreover, next, nor, plus the fact that, then too, thirdly, too, after a few days, afterward, between, in the meantime, later, meanwhile, not long after, soon, then, while, about, at the same time, during, often, until, the following night -finally, last, lastly, at last, at length, eventually, thereafter, as a result, consequently, therefore, thus
Eighth Sentence • Now justify why your favorite artifact represents who you are. • *This _______ project justifies who I am because it reflects/demonstrates how I _______________________. • (love to draw, love to write about history, love to be creative, etc…) • *My plans are to become a _________ (or to work with children) and I know I will be able to use this project because…. • (Be specific here and show me why this assignment was important. [it improved my communication skills, it helped me understand the world around me, it allowed me to collaborate with others….].)
Ninth Sentence: Evaluation • Evaluate whether or not you feel that this artifact is indicative of your ability to be successful. Use one of these templates: • *Now that I have evaluated this project, I feel that I could have _______________. • OR • *Now that I have evaluated this project, I feel that this project was indicative of my ability to be successful because__________. (Brag)
Tenth Sentence: Big Idea • Write what qualities you demonstrated in this project that allowed you to be successful on it. Think of your BIG IDEAS! • Use this language frame: • Some of the qualities that allowed me to be successful on this project was my (that)… • *determination because I … • *I used my time wisely when I…. • *organization because I… • * leadership because I…etc.)
Objectives/goals • Content: I will be able to justify how my subject artifact personally represents me. • Language: I will use the language of JUSTIFY/EVALUATE/ and TRANSTION WORDS to discuss and write with my group and in my paper. • Social: I will respectfully collaborate with my group in the computer lab.