Half-past Two by U.A. Fanthorpe for IGCSE English: Anthology Section C: Exam – Comparative Poetry

1. Half-past Twoby U.A. Fanthorpefor IGCSE English: Anthology Section C: Exam – Comparative Poetry An introduction to this text and to the examination comparison task Mr Elkin-Jones, Cokethorpe School, September 2011 imej@cokethorpe.org

2. Which are the poems on the theme of ‘Childhood’? If Prayer Before Birth Half Past Two Piano Hide and Seek

3. Half-past Two Once upon a schooltime He did Something Very Wrong (I forget what it was). And She said he’d done Something Very Wrong, and must Stay in the school-room till half-past two. (Being cross, she’d forgotten She hadn’t taught him Time. He was too scared of being wicked to remind her.) He knew a lot of time: he knew Gettinguptime, timeyouwereofftime, Timetogohomenowtime, Tvtime, Timeformykisstime (that was Grantime). All the important times he knew, But not half-past two. He knew the clockface, the little eyes And two long legs for walking, But he couldn’t click its language, So he waited, beyond onceupona, Out of reach of all the timefors, And knew he’d escaped for ever Into the smell of old chrysanthemums on Her desk, Into the silent noise his hangnail made. Into the air outside the window, into ever. And then, My goodness, she said, Scuttling in, I forgot all about you. Run along or you’ll be late. So she slotted him back into schooltime, And he got home in time for teatime, Nexttime, notimeforthatnowtime, But he never forgot how once by not knowing time, He escaped into the clockless land of ever, Where time hides tick-less waiting to be born. • “Half-past Two” • Genre: • Nostalgic, narrative poem • Free verse • Timeless in tone • Audience: • Evokes memories of childhood • Subject: • Child admonished • Then forgotten • Child’s experiences of non-numerical time compared against his compartmentalized view of the world • Purpose: • To respect the childhood experience?

4. The subject matter clarified verse by verse

5. Be ready to answer questions, write answers and annotate at speed!

6. Verse 1: establishing time and voice • How is the time established? • With whom, or what, do you associate “once upon a…”? • What is the purpose of the capital letters? • Who is the “I” and why does (she) speak in brackets? Once upon a schooltime He did Something Very Wrong (I forget what it was).

7. Verse 2: techniques And She said he’d done Something Very Wrong, and must Stay in the school-room till half-past two. Who is the “She” character? Why no name for the teacher? Why capitals? Why lower case “he” for the boy? What is gained by using a simple 3 line stanza form?

8. Verse 3: the internal thoughts of both (Being cross, she’d forgotten She hadn’t taught him Time. He was too scared of being wicked to remind her.) What is ‘voice’? “Cross; wicked” – whose language? Why is all of this stanza in capitals? De-chipher the final line. Whose voice is this stanza in?

9. Verse 4: language and viewpoint He knew a lot of time: he knew Gettinguptime, timeyouwereofftime, Timetogohomenowtime, Tvtime, What are these 4 “times” the boy knows? Why present them in these compound ways? Where does the final comma lead….?

10. Verse 5: non-numerical time Timeformykisstime (that was Grantime). All the important times he knew, But not half-past two. To whom are these “time zones” relevant in the poem? So far, how does the poem show differences between the child and adult experiences? Look ahead – what change occurs between this verse/section of the poem, and the next? Subject of sympathy…or humiliation?

11. Verse 6: devices used? He knew the clockface, the little eyes And two long legs for walking, But he couldn’t click its language, Find the: personification; figurative imagery; onomatopoeia Which voice are we in here? Note the change from conversation to poetic language. Is this sustained from hereon in?

12. Verse 7: language and experience So he waited, beyond onceupona, Out of reach of all the timefors, And knew he’d escaped for ever The run together words tell us what of the the boy’s experience of time? Look up the technique “enjambement”: how does it operate in this verse; to what effect?

13. Verse 8: escape into fantasy Into the smell of old chrysanthemums on Her desk, Into the silent noise his hangnail made. Into the air outside the window, into ever. • This is the final stanza of the middle section • Why? What is so special about this one? • What does the use of the following bring to the theme here: • repetition (into) • Sense of smell and sound (flowers and nail) • Oxymoron (…go on, work it out yourself!)

14. Verse 9: final section of poem And then, My goodness, she said, Scuttling in, I forgot all about you. Run along or you’ll be late. • Final section: how does the pace ‘change gear’? • What is the author trying to show by this? • How is a change of voice achieved? • Scuttling – what impression do you get from this verb?

15. Verse 10: a hybrid of times? So she slotted him back into schooltime, And he got home in time for teatime, Nexttime, notimeforthatnowtime, • Opens with conjunction “so”; second line with “and” The impact is…what? • “slotted”: explain the image • Is the teacher dismissive of him? Or simply efficient? • Translate what the boy hears of the teacher into what she might well actually have said.

16. Verse 11: euphoric profundity But he never forgot how once by not knowing time, He escaped into the clockless land of ever, Where time hides tick-less waiting to be born. • Text’s summation becomes gently profound • “clockless land” = a fantasy image: how? • Where is the personification in the final line? • What impact has the boy been left with? • Sense, and celebration, of momentary timelessness he gained – we all wish for this, sometimes

17. Form, Structure, Language:write something illuminating about them NOW!

18. In the exam you must compare texts Do this 4 paragraph essay planning task now in pairs

19. Half-past Twoby U.A. Fanthorpefor IGCSE English: Anthology Section C: Exam – Comparative Poetry An introduction to this text and to the examination comparison task Mr Elkin-Jones, Cokethorpe School, September 2011 imej@cokethorpe.org