The Mystery of Wal-Mart

1. The Mystery of Wal-Mart By Corey Groft

2. What! Not again! We have to get them!” said David. “Sorry sir we have no idea how they did it again. They also took my Jack of Diamonds!”said Commando with a small smirk. Commando’s Jack of Diamonds was very valuable to him. He thought it was lucky because it helped him out a lot. Once he was locked in a house, Commando used his card to pick the lock. He always won a card game if he had that card in his hand.

3. “What is all this fuss about?” said Detective 1Eyedhawk. “Someone stole from Wal-Mart again! They’re almost out of all their merchandise in stock,” Commando said nervously. “We’ll find out who is stealing from Wal-Mart,” said Secret bravely. “I may only be an apprentice, but 1eyedhawk is coming too.” “Ok I’ll come too,” said 1eyedhawk

4. “This is all the evidence we have,” said Commando while he turned on the tape. The tape showed a neon car (which looked a lot like Commando’s car) running red lights and crashing cars just to block the entrances to Wal-Mart. 1Eyedhawk noticed a small card fly outthe window. All he could see was red because it was far away. “Wait replay it,” said 1Eyedhawk.   This time 1Eyedhawk focused on the card, it flew out the window and landed near Wal-Mart.

5. “Commando, try and zoom in and find the license plate,” Secret said, “I‘ll try,” replied Commando. “Secret and I will look at the crime scene .” Said 1eyedhawk Secret could tell 1Eyedhawk was up to something by his grin, but what? “Secret, look for evidence,” said 1Eyedhawk. All they found was a black glove, a receipt to Shur Fine, gum on the wall, a bandage, and a penny. “Hey, isn’t Shur Fine Commando’s favorite store?” asked Secret. 

6. “Yeah what a coincidence…”murmured  1Eyedhawk. “Commando is calling me. ‘Hello? Oh ok, I will meet you there.’ He said he found out where the car went , lets meet him there.” 1Eyedhawk said to Secret. When 1Eyedhawk and Secret made it to the house the police were about to arrest the man inside the house. “I didn’t do it! You must have the wrong person. I was here the whole time watching the discovery channel with my kids,” said the man. “It wasn’t him , he is innocent,” said 1Eyedhawk. “Anyways where is Commando ? He was here a moment ago right?” “Yeah, he was here.” said Secret.

7. “Look for him I think he is our criminal or he knows something,” said 1Eyedhawk. They looked everywhere they couldn’t find Commando. Then Secret found him at the least expected place, out in public. Secret found this note in Commando’s pocket, it read, go to the forest look to the left, this is the secret entrance to our HQ “What does it mean?” yelled Secret.

8. Finally 1Eyedhawk arrived and even he couldn’t read it. They reported back to David. Luckily he could translate it with the help of his decoder. It read ‘Go to the forest look to the left, this is our secret entrance to our HQ.’ They went there and there was a couple of people there, including David their leader, and Commando also an enemy. “This must be a trap they wouldn’t tell us how to get here unless it was a trap,”thought 1Eyedhawk. Secret was thinking the same thing.

9. Epilogue They threw a bread crumb on the ground and a trap was activated. David’s gang tried to escape. 1Eyedhawk and Secret captured them. After they captured everyone and put them in jail, 1Eyedhawk was promoted and became the leader of the squad (taking David’s spot)and Secret got promoted to a detective (his dream).They never found out how they stole from Wal-Mart.