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Peer Review. Northeastern Writing Center. W riting Center Quick Facts. A free service for undergraduate students, graduate students, staff, faculty, and alumni Appointments are 45 minutes long
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Peer Review Northeastern Writing Center
Writing Center Quick Facts • A free service for undergraduate students, graduate students, staff, faculty, and alumni • Appointments are 45 minutes long • Clients can bring in any piece of writing that they’re working on and receive friendly feedback from a knowledgeable peer who may be an undergraduate student, graduate student, or faculty/staff member. • Writers can meet with their consultants online, at our Holmes Hall location, or our Snell Library location. • Consultants don’t edit papers, but they are happy to work with writers on their grammar, word choices, and structure MORE INFO: northeastern.edu/writingcenter ABOUT US: Youtube Video
What students should have in this session • Printed Copy Peer Review • one printed copy of your draft to class (with your name on it) • Pen/Pencil • Electronic Peer Review • your complete draft submitted to the correct platform before class • A device that lets you read someone else’s work in a large format (laptop or tablet) OR
Peer Review: Today’s steps • 1. Writer’s Note: reflect on your own essay. (8 min.) • 2. Reader’s Note: read and respond to your partner’s essay. (30 min) • 3. Discuss (15 min.) • 4. Build a Revision Plan (5 min.)
What’s your role during peer review? • To be an active reader • To listen to your partner’s ideas • To see if your partner’s paragraphs are effectively telling the story of their core idea • To learn from others by seeing how they approached the writing task • To check that you and your partner are meeting the assignment requirements
What’s not your role during peer review? • To offer simplistic good/bad value judgments on the writing • To nitpick on grammar • To “fix” your partner’s writing
Want a great peer review session? Certain things need to happen. • WRITERS NEED TO: • Be open to feedback; be curious about your reader’s response • Be willing to be vulnerable; try to trust your partner and put aside defensiveness /nerves. • READERS NEED TO • Be kind and honest • Pay attention to strengths and weaknesses • Provide specific, concrete suggestions • Read critically (not superficially) • Give feedback as a reader, not as a writer who would step in and “take over”
1. Writer’s Note (8 min.) • Take a few minutes to write a note for your reader that addresses these three questions: • Where is your draft in process? (e.g. first draft, ninth draft, started last night) • Assess your own piece. What is working and what isn’t? • What sort of feedback, specifically, are you looking for from your partner today?
2. Reader’s Note (30 min.) • Swap drafts with your partner. In your first reading, aim to be “hands off.” While you’re reading there are threemoves you can make: • i. Create a Reverse Outline that records what you think your partner was trying to do in each section. You can create a bullet-point list on a separate piece of paper, or you can leave notes in the margins. • ii. Write a short letter telling them what you noticed. Try to use 4-5 of the helpful moves (next slide) and address the concerns you see in the Writer’s Note. • iii. Save editing suggestions in a second or third round of reading… but wait! Do this last and only if you really know the rules. . .
Short Letter: Helpful Moves • Helpful • Summarizing: “Overall, you seem to be arguing…” • Glossing: “The word … seems to capture this section of writing” • Responding “As I read this part, I …” • Pointing: “What’s most important here is …. What’s missing is ….” • Extending: “You could also apply this to … What would happen if you …?” • Encouraging: “This section works well for me because …” • Suggesting: “If I were you, I would …. You could move this …” • Soliciting: “Could you say more here?” • Connecting: “That’s like what X says…” “I saw some research on this…” • Evaluating: “This source is well integrated” • Counter-arguing: “Others might argue …” • Questioning: “Why do you say …? What do you mean by …?” • Not so helpful • “I like it” • “I hate it” • “It’s okay” • “It’s good.” • “I wouldn’t change a thing”
3. Return & Discuss (10-15 min) Return the drafts to each other. Take a few minutes to vocalize what was working well and what could be improved. Focus on the top 2-3 things you’d suggest for each other for revision.
4. Build a Revision Plan (5 min.) • Jot down 3-5 things that you plan to do to prepare your final draft: • 1. • 2. • 3. • 4. • 5. • Prioritize the bigger picture ideas of your essay (e.g. missing evidence, unclear paragraphs, more research or analysis)
Notes Adapted from materials used by Kyle Oddis and Neal Lerner. APA Citation: Northeastern Writing Center (2018). Peer Review [PowerPoint Slides]. Retrieved from http://www.northeastern.edu/writingcenter/
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