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Showing students how to turn their ideas into an email

Showing students how to turn their ideas into an email Showing students how to elaborate their ideas and combine ideas. From: garyboy@gmail.com. To: jasonjason@yahoo.com.hk. Date: 17 October 2010 . Subject: My school project on interesting places in Hong Kong. Hi Jason,

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Showing students how to turn their ideas into an email

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  1. Showing students how to turn their ideas into an email • Showing students how to elaborate their ideas and combine ideas

  2. From: garyboy@gmail.com To: jasonjason@yahoo.com.hk Date: 17 October 2010 Subject: My school project on interesting places in Hong Kong Hi Jason, How are you? I am doing a project on ‘Interesting places in Hong Kong’. I have planned to visit some tourist spots with my group members. We went to the Space Museum in Tsim Sha Tsui last Saturday. We watched a sky show about Space. It was interesting. We looked at the displays. We learned a lot about the Solar System. It was exciting. We will go to Hong Kong Wetland Park tomorrow. We will look at the plants and animals. We will enjoy the view of the nature, too. My father has already bought a camera for me. My mother has just ironed my PE clothes. I have already prepared a hat but I haven’t bought any bread for my lunch! Have you ever been to a tourist spot in Hong Kong? Where have you been? What did you do there? Where will you go this year? Have you prepared well? Love, Gary You are Jason. You got an email from your friend, Gary. He wrote about his school project. Read and reply to his email in about 80 words.

  3. From: jasonjason@yahoo.com.hk To: garyboy@gmail.com Date: 17 October 2010 Subject: Greeting: Who got the e-mail? Subject & Introduction: What is the e-mail about? My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong Body: What does Gary want to know? What will you write? Hi Gary, Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about the place that I have been to.

  4. From: garyboy@gmail.com To: jasonjason@yahoo.com.hk Date: 17 October 2010 Subject: My school project on interesting places in Hong Kong Hi Jason, How are you? I am doing a project on ‘Interesting places in Hong Kong’. I have planned to visit some tourist spots with my group members. We went to the Space Museum in Tsim Sha Tsui last Saturday. We watched a sky show about Space. It was interesting. We looked at the displays. We learned a lot about the Solar System. It was exciting. We will go to Hong Kong Wetland Park tomorrow. We will look at the plants and animals. We will enjoy the view of the nature, too. My father has already bought a camera for me. My mother has just ironed my PE clothes. I have already prepared a hat but I haven’t bought any bread for my lunch! Have you ever been to a tourist spot in Hong Kong? Where have you been? What did you do there? Where will you go this year? Have you prepared well? Love, Gary What will you write in paragraph 2? • Have you ever been to a tourist spot in Hong Kong? • Where have you been? • What did you there?     

  5. Body: What does Gary want to know? What will you write? From: jasonjason@yahoo.com.hk To: garyboy@gmail.com Date: 17 October 2010 Subject: • Have you ever been to a tourist spot in Hong Kong? • Where have you been? • What did you there? My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong Hi Gary, Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about the place that I have been to. I went there I have been to Hong Kong Wetland Park. last Saturday.

  6. Body: What does Gary want to know? What will you write? From: jasonjason@yahoo.com.hk To: garyboy@gmail.com Date: 17 October 2010 Subject: • Have you ever been to a tourist spot in Hong Kong? • Where have you been? • What did you there? My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong Hi Gary, Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about the place that I have been to. I went there I have been to Hong Kong Wetland Park. last Saturday.

  7. Body: What does Gary want to know? What will you write? From: jasonjason@yahoo.com.hk To: garyboy@gmail.com Date: 17 October 2010 Subject: • Have you ever been to a tourist spot in Hong Kong? • Where have you been? • What did you there? My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong Hi Gary, Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about the place that I have been to. I went there I have been to Hong Kong Wetland Park. last Saturday. I watched birds and looked at the plants. They were beautiful. I took a lot of photos. It was great!

  8. Body: What does Gary want to know? What will you write? From: jasonjason@yahoo.com.hk To: garyboy@gmail.com Date: 17 October 2010 Subject: • Where will you go this year? • Have you prepared well? My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong Hi Gary, Thank you for your email. Let me tell you the place that I have been to. I went there I have been to Hong Kong Wetland Park. last Saturday. I watched birds and looked at the plants. They were beautiful. I took a lot of photos. It was great! I will go hiking. I will go to the Peak next Sunday. I will look at the beautiful view from the Peak. I will take I have brought a lot of pretty photos there. It will be fun! a camera and a hat but I have not bought any cakes for my lunch.I will do it next Saturday.

  9. From: garyboy@gmail.com To: jasonjason@yahoo.com.hk Date: 17 October 2010 Subject: My school project on interesting places in Hong Kong Hi Jason, How are you? I am doing a project on ‘Interesting places in Hong Kong’. I have planned to visit some tourist spots with my group members. We went to the Space Museum in Tsim Sha Tsui last Saturday. We watched a sky show about Space. It was interesting. We looked at the displays. We learned a lot about the Solar System. It was exciting. We will go to Hong Kong Wetland Park tomorrow. We will look at the plants and animals. We will enjoy the view of the nature, too. My father has already bought a camera for me. My mother has just ironed my PE clothes. I have already prepared a hat but I haven’t bought any bread for my lunch! Have you ever been to a tourist spot in Hong Kong? Where have you been? What did you do there? Where will you go this year? Have you prepared well? Love, Gary What will you write in paragraph 3? • Where will you go this year? • Have you prepared well?     

  10. Body: What does Gary want to know? What will you write? From: jasonjason@yahoo.com.hk To: garyboy@gmail.com Date: 17 October 2010 Subject: • Where will you go this year? • Have you prepared well? My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong Hi Gary, Thank you for your email. Let me tell you the place that I have been to. I went there I have been to Hong Kong Wetland Park. last Saturday. I watched birds and looked at the plants. They were beautiful. I took a lot of photos. It was great! I will go hiking. I will go to the Peak next Sunday. I will look at the beautiful view from the Peak. I will take I have brought a lot of pretty photos there. It will be fun! a camera and a hat but I have not bought any cakes for my lunch. I will do it next Saturday.

  11. From: jasonjason@yahoo.com.hk To: garyboy@gmail.com Date: 17 October 2010 Subject: Ending: Say why you stop writing / how you feel: I have to go now. It’s dinner time. I am looking forward to going there. My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong Hi Gary, Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about the place that I have been to. I went there I have been to Hong Kong Wetland Park. last Saturday. I watched birds and looked at the plants. They were beautiful. I took a lot of photos. It was great! I will go hiking. I will go to the Peak next Sunday. I will look at the beautiful view from the Peak. I will take Closing: I have brought a lot of pretty photos there. It will be fun! a camera and a hat but I have not bought any cakes for my lunch. I will do it next Saturday. Who writes the e-mail? I am looking forward to going there. Love,

  12. From: jasonjason@yahoo.com.hk To: garyboy@gmail.com Date: 17 October 2010 Subject: Ending: Say why you stop writing / how you feel: I have to go now. It’s dinner time. I am looking forward to going there. My visits to tourist spots in Hong Kong Hi Gary, Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about the place that I have been to. I went there I have been to Hong Kong Wetland Park. last Saturday. I watched birds and looked at the plants. They were beautiful. I took a lot of photos. It was great! I will go hiking. I will go to the Peak next Sunday. I will look at the beautiful view from the Peak. I will take Closing: I have brought a lot of pretty photos there. It will be fun! a camera and a hat but I have not bought any cakes for my lunch. I will do it next Saturday. Who writes the e-mail? I am looking forward to going there. Love, Jason

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