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Compare, Diagnose, Operate. Angela Bell. CDO. CDO is a strategy to help with revising an essay or story. C= Compare D= Diagnose O= Operate. Compare. Read the sentence. Diagnose. Select the best diagnose cards. This doesn’t sound quite right. This is not what I intended to say.
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Compare, Diagnose, Operate Angela Bell
CDO • CDO is a strategy to help with revising an essay or story. • C= Compare • D= Diagnose • O= Operate
Compare • Read the sentence.
Diagnose • Select the best diagnose cards. • This doesn’t sound quite right. • This is not what I intended to say. • Part of the essay isn’t in the right order. • People may not understand what I mean. • I’m getting away from my main point. • This is a weak or incomplete idea. • The problem is ____________.
Operate • Select an operate card. • Add: Include more information, examples, details, and so forth. • Leave this part out: Take something (a word, phrase, sentence) out. • Rewrite: Say it (a word, phrase, sentence) in a different way. • Change the wording: Rearrange information (a word, phrase, sentence) • Make your revision.