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TMO Paper Review. For Publication in: Journal of Biomedical Semantics. Eric Rozell, Tetherless World Constellation. Outline. Journal Scope Paper Review. JBMS Scope.
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TMO Paper Review For Publication in: Journal of Biomedical Semantics Eric Rozell, Tetherless World Constellation
Outline • Journal Scope • Paper Review
JBMS Scope • Infrastructure for biomedical semantics, focusing on semantic resources and repositories, meta-data management and resource description, knowledge representation and semantic frameworks, Biomedical Semantic Web, semantic interoperability, and particularly, life-long management of semantic resources. • Semantic mining, annotation and analysis, focusing on approaches and applications of semantic resources and tools for investigation, reasoning, prediction and discoveries in biomedicine.
Scientific Quality • Are the methods appropriate and presented in sufficient detail to allow the results to be repeated? • Ontology design process is not described well enough to be repeatable. • More details on moving from research questions to use cases to ontology. • Are the data adequate to support the conclusions? • Scalability of the knowledge base and reasoning techniques is not addressed. • The data uses only a small number of patient records. • However, work focused on integrative vocabulary, and not a production ready system.
Presentations • Figures: Are they justified? Are they sharp, with lettering proportionate to the size of the figure? Are there legends to explain the figures? • The syntax of Figure 1 is not clear (e.g., the dark blue lines, and the distinction, if any, between vocabularies and datasets) • I couldn’t find a reference to Figure 4, and its significance is not explained well in the figure caption. • Tables: Can they be simplified or condensed? Should any be omitted? • The content in Table 2 does not seem particularly significant, especially since all class mappings are not provided, and it is cluttered and hard to read.
Research Violations • Are the interviews for the development of use cases and research questions classified as research involving human subjects?
Confidential Comments • Provide comments regarding the novelty and significance of the manuscript. • Integrates diverse medical datasets • Details on methods for data integration • Provides use cases for eHRs and integrates eHRs with external data resources • Provide a recommendation about the manuscript’s suitability for publication in the journal; these comments will not be returned to the author(s). • Has broad coverage of Semantic Web technology applications • Could have more emphasis on the tools that will utilize the technologies presented
Comments for Author • Comments above (except confidential comments) • Authors did not address potential for error in external resources, nor future plans for handling versioning on these resources.