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Nitpicky Revision

2012. Photograph.  Simple Chem Concepts . 2012. Web. 10 Apr. 2013. <www.simplechemconcepts.com>. Nitpicky Revision. The day before the paper is due. Thesis Statement. Look at the last sentence of the first paragraph. Does it mention Animal Farm ?

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Nitpicky Revision

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  1. 2012. Photograph. Simple Chem Concepts. 2012. Web. 10 Apr. 2013. <www.simplechemconcepts.com>. Nitpicky Revision The day before the paper is due

  2. Thesis Statement • Look at the last sentence of the first paragraph. • Does it mention Animal Farm? • Say it aloud. Can anyone argue against the statement? • Is it easy to understand? What will the author be talking about in the essay? • Advanced: Does it mention the authorreader relationship (Orwell’s reasoning)

  3. Diction (word choice) • Go through the essay and circle all of the following: Verbs (change to action verbs) • Is • Are • Be • Am • Was • Were • Has been • Are being • Might have been *Note* Make sure you are NOT repeating yourself when you revise. You want strong verbs, but shouldn’t repeat verbs within paragraphs. *Resource:* Snappy Words

  4. Diction (word choice) 3. Go through the essay and put a box around all of the following. Simplistic Words: • Amazing • Awesome • Awfully • Bad • Beautiful • Big • Easy • Fine • Good • Great • Happy • Hard • Interesting • Like • Mad • Nice • Really • Sad • Said • Very *Resource:* Snappy Words

  5. Formal Tone Go through the essay and underline any of the following: • You, your • I, my, me, us, we, our, ours • “this quote” borderline breaking formal façade. • Any conjunction (but, and, so) at the beginning of a sentence.

  6. MLA Go through the essay and highlight any of the following: • Make sure the header is in MLA and has a different number on each page • Make sure MLA Heading is correct w/ due date (12 April 2013) • Make sure quotes are incorporated correctly Example: In the first chapter, Orwell discusses that “man is the only creature that consumes without producing” (Orwell 9). • Check that each direct quote and paraphrase has a in-text citation. • Use writing guide to check MLA citations.

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