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802.11 TGmb Editor Report – Jan 2012. Authors:. Date: 2012-01-12. Abstract. This document summarises editorial activities on the TGmb Draft since the last meeting This document is cumulative, newer data at the front – i.e., it will be revised per meeting to show updated status.
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802.11 TGmb Editor Report – Jan 2012 Authors: Date: 2012-01-12 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Abstract • This document summarises editorial activities on the TGmb Draft since the last meeting • This document is cumulative, newer data at the front – i.e., it will be revised per meeting to show updated status. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
January 2012 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Balloting Status Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
SB6 Comments • Resolutions for these two comments were approved at the 15 November 2011 TGmb telecon (see doc 11-11/1592r0). • Commenter withdrew the comments. • No changes were made to the draft, no comments, so the ballot sequence was complete at this point. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Report to the EC • Document 11-11/1533r2 contains the updated report to the EC demonstrating meeting the terms of the conditional approval granted in the November 2011 EC. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) • D1.0, 2009-05 – balloted as LB149 (WG0) • D2.0, 2009-12 – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. (WG1) • D3.0, 2010-03 – balloted as LB162 (WG2) • D4.0, 2010-06 – for ballot (WG3) • D5.0, 2010-08 – for ballot (WG4) • D6.0, 2010-09 – first sponsor ballot, includes MEC change (SB0) • D7.0, 2011-02 – Sponsor recirc #1 (SB1) • D8.0, 2011-03 – Sponsor Recirc #2 (SB2) • D9.0, 2011-05 – Sponsor Recirc #3 (SB3) • D10.0, 2011-08 – Sponsor Recirc #4 (SB4) • D11.0, 2011-10 – Sponsor Recirc #5 (SB5) • D12.0, 2011-11 – Sponsor Recirc #6 (SB6) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Documents • REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) • Draft P802.11REVmb_D12.0.pdf • Draft P802.11REVmb_D12.0 Redline*.pdf • Composite comments (all ad-hocs) • 11-10-1284-18-000m-revmb-sponsor-ballot-comments.xls Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Publication editing process • IEEE-SA has appointed Dianne Lacey as publication editor • Dianne edited the previous revision, so relevant experience • No direct contact has yet been made • Dianne will supply marked-up copyedits • Adrian will review all edits and generate a spreadsheet detailing responses to any questions in the copyedit, or any issues arising • This will be iterated with Dianne • IEEE-SA also do a review during this process • Adrian will refer to a review panel where necessary: • Dorothy Stanley, David Hunter (??), Peter Ecclesine, Mark Hamilton, Stephen McCann Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Future Events • REVmb is on the Jan 2012 RevCom continuous processing agenda • Approval will be in early Feb by IEEE SASB email ballot • According to IEEE-SA staff, publication is expected during March-April 2012 • Note impact on publication of TGae and TGaa • Publication of these has to be delayed until REVmb is complete • The awards ceremony, including that all-important group hug, has to wait until after publication. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Nov 2011 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Balloting Status Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Numbering • Keeping all comments from WG and Sponsor ballots in the same spreadsheet. • The initial sponsor ballot is shown as LB 1000 • Comments from 10000 onwards • The first recirc is LB1001 • Comments from 11000 onwards • The second recirc is LB1002 • Comments from 12001 to 12863 • The third recirc is LB1003 • Comments from 13001 to 13209 and comments 13300-13306 • The fourth recirc is LB1004 • Comments from 14001 to 14257 • The fifth recirc is LB1005 • Comments from 15001 to 15092 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
SB5 Commenters ** Note CID 15100 (Dan Harkins) is a placeholder for a change approved by motion Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) • D1.0, 2009-05 – balloted as LB149 (WG0) • D2.0, 2009-12 – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. (WG1) • D3.0, 2010-03 – balloted as LB162 (WG2) • D4.0, 2010-06 – for ballot (WG3) • D5.0, 2010-08 – for ballot (WG4) • D6.0, 2010-09 – first sponsor ballot, includes MEC change (SB0) • D7.0, 2011-02 – Sponsor recirc #1 (SB1) • D8.0, 2011-03 – Sponsor Recirc #2 (SB2) • D9.0, 2011-05 – Sponsor Recirc #3 (SB3) • D10.0, 2011-08 – Sponsor Recirc #4 (SB4) • D11.0, 2011-10 – Sponsor Recirc #5 (SB5) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Documents • REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) • Draft P802.11REVmb_D12.0.pdf • Draft P802.11REVmb_D12.0 Redline*.pdf • Composite comments (all ad-hocs) • 11-10-1284-16-000m-revmb-sponsor-ballot-comments.xls • Comments assigned to / held by editor • For: resolution, editing or other action • 11-10-1455-20-000m-revmb-sponsor-ballot-editor-comments.xls Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Comment Status (2011-10-28) • All 92 comments from SB5 were approved by the CRC on its 28 October 2011 telecon. • One additional comment added as a placeholder for motion 137. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Plan Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Sept 2011 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Balloting Status Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Numbering • Keeping all comments from WG and Sponsor ballots in the same spreadsheet. • The initial sponsor ballot is shown as LB 1000 • Comments from 10000 onwards • The first recirc is LB1001 • Comments from 11000 onwards • The second recirc is LB1002 • Comments from 12001 to 12863 • The third recirc is LB1003 • Comments from 13001 to 13209 and comments 13300-13306 • The fourth recirc is LB1004 • Comments from 14001 to 14257 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
SB4 Commenters Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) • D1.0, 2009-05 – balloted as LB149 (WG0) • D2.0, 2009-12 – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. (WG1) • D3.0, 2010-03 – balloted as LB162 (WG2) • D4.0, 2010-06 – for ballot (WG3) • D5.0, 2010-08 – for ballot (WG4) • D6.0, 2010-09 – first sponsor ballot, includes MEC change (SB0) • D7.0, 2011-02 – Sponsor recirc #1 (SB1) • D8.0, 2011-03 – Sponsor Recirc #2 (SB2) • D9.0, 2011-05 – Sponsor Recirc #3 (SB3) • D10.0, 2011-08 – Sponsor Recirc #4 (SB4) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Documents • REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) • Draft P802.11REVmb_D10.0.pdf • Draft P802.11REVmb_D10.0 Redline*.pdf • Composite comments (all ad-hocs) • 11-10-1284-13-000m-revmb-sponsor-ballot-comments.xls • Comments assigned to / held by editor • For: resolution, editing or other action • 11-10-1455-12-000m-revmb-sponsor-ballot-editor-comments.xls Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Comment Status (2011-09-18) Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Editorial comment resolutions Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Status of 802.11s • A pre-publication version of 802.11s was received from the IEEE-SA editors in order to allow balloting of .11s in this recirculation. • IEEE Std 802.11s-2011 was approved by the IEEE-SA standards board and published the same day on 10 Sept. • There are some minor editorial tweaks made between the pre-publication version and the published version. These will be propagated into D11. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Plan (as of July 2011) • We slipped about 1 week due to holidays Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Plan - 2 • Current goal is November EC approval and Jan RevCom (continuous process), with publication in Jan/Feb. • Given we might not complete SB4 comment resolution during the September meeting, what impact might this have? Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
E-motion 1 • Approve comment resolutions in 11-10-1455-12-000m-revmb-sponsor-ballot-editor-comments on the following tabs: • Editorials • Trivial Technical And excluding CIDs 14115 and 14114 • Moved: • Seconded: Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
July 2011 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Balloting Status Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Numbering • Keeping all comments from WG and Sponsor ballots in the same spreadsheet. • The initial sponsor ballot is shown as LB 1000 • Comments from 10000 onwards • The first recirc is LB1001 • Comments from 11000 onwards • The second recirc is LB1002 • Comments from 12001 to 12863 • The third recirc is LB1003 • Commends from 13001 to 13208, plus comment 13209 and comments 13300-13306 received after the close of the ballot Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
SB3 Commenters Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) • D1.0, 2009-05 – balloted as LB149 (WG0) • D2.0, 2009-12 – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. (WG1) • D3.0, 2010-03 – balloted as LB162 (WG2) • D4.0, 2010-06 – for ballot (WG3) • D5.0, 2010-08 – for ballot (WG4) • D6.0, 2010-09 – first sponsor ballot, includes MEC change (SB0) • D7.0, 2011-02 – Sponsor recirc #1 (SB1) • D8.0, 2011-03 – Sponsor Recirc #2 (SB2) • D9.0, 2011-05 – Sponsor Recirc #3 (SB3) • D9.01 Speculative editing of SB3 editorials/terminology Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Documents • REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) • Draft P802.11REVmb_D8.0.pdf • Draft P802.11REVmb_D8.0 Redline*.pdf • Composite comments (all ad-hocs) • 11-10-1284-08-000m-revmb-sponsor-ballot-comments.xls • Comments assigned to / held by editor • For: resolution, editing or other action • 11-10-1455-06-000m-revmb-sponsor-ballot-editor-comments.xls Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Comment Status (2011-07-07) Note – Ad-hoc Notes counts those comments with non-blank ad-hoc notes, an indication of some progress towards a resolution. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Editorial comment resolutions • Comment resolutions are proposed in document 11-10/1455r8. • The group is requested to pay particular attention to the “Technical*” tabs, as these introduce some normative language. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Status of MIB • MIB compiles, after fixing one compilation error (see CID 13013) • Please also be aware that the 802.11 MC process proposal (see 11-11-0615-03-0000-WG802.11 MC process) requires the MIB to compile prior to sponsor ballot and to resolve any compliance issues introduced by an amendment. • There is a meeting slot (monday pm2) set aside to review this process and determine support or otherwise for it • TGaa, TGae and TGad have been through the 11MC process and their MIBs have been modifies to comply – i.e. they compile and introduce no new compliance issues. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Status of 802.11s • D12 will the version edited. • IEEE-SA are working on this now and understand our need for “early August” sources. • If necessary, I will edit in a “pre-publication” edit and track subsequent changes to publication. • Any slip here will directly impact our plan Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Plan • Note – does not include effect of Editor holiday Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Plan - 2 • The submission deadline for Dec RevCom is prior to the November EC sessions. • This is not possible • So best route to approval is November EC and Jan RevCom (continuous process), with publication in Jan/Feb. Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
E-motion 1 • Approve comment resolutions in 11-10-1455-08-000m-revmb-sponsor-ballot-editor-comments on the following tabs: • Editorials • MEC • Technical • Technical - Ensures • Moved: • Seconded: Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
E-motion 2 • Having approved comment resolutions for all of the comments received from the initial Sponsor Ballot on P802.11REVmb D9.0, • Instruct the editor to prepare Draft 10.0 incorporating these resolutions and, • Approve a 15 day Sponsor Recirculation Ballot asking the question “Should P802.11REVmb D10.0 be forwarded to RevCom?” Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
May 2011 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Balloting Status Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Numbering • Keeping all comments from WG and Sponsor ballots in the same spreadsheet. • The initial sponsor ballot is shown as LB 1000 • Comments from 10000 onwards • The first recirc is LB1001 • Comments from 11000 onwards • The second recirc is LB1002 • Comments from 12001 to 12863 Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
SB2 Commenters Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
REVmb Draft Numbering History (part) • D1.0, 2009-05 – balloted as LB149 • D2.0, 2009-12 – completion of LB149 edits. Balloted version. • D3.0 – balloted as LB162 • D3.02 – editing of LB162 technical • D4.0 – for ballot • D4.01 – Speculative editing of LB163 editorials • D5.0 – for ballot • D6.0 – first sponsor ballot, includes MEC change • D7.0 – Sponsor recirc #1 (SB1) • D7.01 – 802.11v roll-in • D7.02 – Speculative editing of LB1001 editorials • D7.03 – 802.11u roll-in • D7.04 – Editing of remaining approved comment resolutions + Defects from D7.01, D7.02 & D7.03 • D 7.05 – defect resolution from D7.04 • D8.0 – Sponsor Recirc #2 (SB2) • D8.01 Speculative editing of SB2 editorials/terminology Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation
Documents • REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website) • Draft P802.11REVmb_D8.0.pdf • Draft P802.11REVmb_D8.0 Redline*.pdf • Composite comments (all ad-hocs) • 11-10-1284-08-000m-revmb-sponsor-ballot-comments.xls • Comments assigned to / held by editor • For: resolution, editing or other action • 11-10-1455-06-000m-revmb-sponsor-ballot-editor-comments.xls Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation