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Essay #1: Peer Review Groups. Haley, Jake, Trey Baily Ann, Trevor, Cam Ana, Joe, Brian Elizabeth, Hope, Billy Jay, Cecilia Ann, Mark Delaney, Epi , Christian Saera , Conner, Bo Tanner, John, Carson Ian, Coco. Homework. Read the essays of your group members.
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Essay #1: Peer Review Groups • Haley, Jake, Trey • Baily Ann, Trevor, Cam • Ana, Joe, Brian • Elizabeth, Hope, Billy • Jay, Cecilia Ann, Mark • Delaney, Epi, Christian • Saera, Conner, Bo • Tanner, John, Carson • Ian, Coco
Homework • Read the essays of your group members. • While reading, keep notes of your experience: • What grabbed you? • What was less interesting (maybe some cutting can be done)? • Where were you confused or felt you needed more information? • Did the overall order of the essay make sense? • What was your feeling at the end? • You will share these notes with your peer review partners on Tuesday.
Writing Meditation “Do you have the patience to wait ‘til your mud settles and the water is clear? Can you remain unmoving ‘til the right action arises by itself?” --Tao TeChing Singing Bowl Sounds
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