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Community Relations and Dissertation Writing. Questions about annotated bibliography assignment? How is it going? How far along are you? Remember need to complete 20 annotations to turn in by Oct 22.
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Community Relations and Dissertation Writing • Questions about annotated bibliography assignment? How is it going? How far along are you? Remember need to complete 20 annotations to turn in by Oct 22. • Questions about dissertation summary? How is it going? How far along are you? Remember need both summary to turn in by Oct 15 and presentation by next week, Oct 15, or Oct 22.
Schedule Dissertation Summary Presentations Monica Barnard 10/15 or 10/22 Lisa Lacova-Bhat 10/15 or 10/22 John Butterworth 10/15 or 10/22 Lauran Chapple 10/15 or 10/22 Gary Greer 10/15 or 10/22 Tia Klug-Wessell 10/15 or 10/22 Eric Mead 10/15 or 10/22 Amanda Naranjo 10/15 or 10/22 Jeanelle Parrott 10/15 or 10/22 Margaret Rains 10/15 or 10/22
Dissertation Presentation Guidelines • Summary and copy of dissertation MUST be turned in before the presentation. • Presentation should have some kind of visual support, preferably organized on slides. • Presentation should be engaging AND professional. • Slides may be referred to, but just reading slides is not encouraged. • Time limit – about 12 minutes, including discussion.
Community Relations • How can we categorize our various relationships with community members and organizations? • What are the challenges for including your relationships with various communities in your dissertation? • What types of support do you need?
Philosophical Dissertation Example Dissertation written by TianyingZang On DH Lawrence’s Philosophy of Nature – An Eastern View
Front Material • Very brief! • No list of figures or tables • No acknowledgements • No forward • Two brief notes about various editions of source materials • Title page • Declaration of authenticity • Abstract (1 page) • Table of Contents
Chapter 1 • Treats Lawrence as a case study • Focuses on his beliefs, behaviors, writing, and what others thought of him • Begins with statements about Lawrence that are likely to engage the reader • Structure is more or less chronological • The ideas mentioned focus on his beliefs and understanding of the world that will be relevant to the analysis presented in later chapters • Makes conclusion relevant to this chapter • Uses Chicago format • 96 citations for Chapter 1 • are a combination of works by Lawrence, and professional literary analyses by others in this field, and varying other authors (e.g., Alan Watts) who had written on related topics
Chapter 2 • Begins with discussion of Taoist notions of the relationship between humans and nature • Cites relevant examples from Lawrence’s writing, as well as analyses by others in this field • Conclusion • 91 citations in this chapter, almost all professional but do include a couple of non-professional sources of information about Taoism • Reference to Dogen appears to be from a professional literary publication
Chapter 3 • Focuses on different aspects of Lawrence’s beliefs – those about nature, the unknown, god, and evolution • Taoist beliefs are considered/analyzed alongside Lawrence’s beliefs as seen in his various written works • Other belief systems are also briefly compared, where relevant, including Hinduism, the Aztecs, western philosophies, Darwin’s theory • Makes conclusion • 106 references
Chapter 4 • This chapter focuses on Lawrence’s life principle, as established in earlier chapters • This analysis takes on the same form as earlier chapters • Focus is more on alignment of Lawrence with Buddhism, Confucianism, but Taoism is also represented • 76 references, all appear to be professional
Chapter 5 • Lawrence’s concept of duality is analyzed in terms of Yin-Yang • Conclusion • 70 citations
Chapter 6 • Lawrence’s perception of life and death is compared to Taoist beliefs about life and death • Christian beliefs are used for contrast • Conclusion • 80 citations
Chapter 7 • Consciousness, mind & body • More western philosophy discussed here, especially that of his time • Alignment/comparison with Taoist beliefs • Other professional analyses are cited and used to support position(s) • 149 citations
Chapter 8 • Discusses Lawrence’s abhorrence of modern culture and how his beliefs were aligned with various Native American traditions • 95 citations
Chapter 9 - Conclusion • 15 citations
Bibliography • Primary Sources • DH Lawrence • Laozi • Zhuangzi • Secondary Sources • 5 ½ pages of almost entirely professional sources
Nothing More • The work ends with the last citation in the bibliography.
DISCUSSION • What are the primary differences in format (not MLA vs APA or Chicago) between this dissertation and the one we saw last week? • What are the primary differences in content between this dissertation and the one we saw last week? • What is included and what is omitted? • What is included within a chapter? • What is the nature of the original contribution that makes it qualify as a dissertation? • What is the difference between a meta-analysis and this type of analysis of existing texts and transcripts? • What are primary differences in types of sources used in citations?