Avoid Camouflaged Verbs

1. Avoid Camouflaged Verbs This step takes the identification process further and involves a comparison of each stamping further. This step identifies and compares each stamping method. Some people labour under the impression that air pollution is a special preserve of the highly developed countries. Some people think that air pollution occurs in highly developed countries.

2. Avoid Camouflaged Verbs The result was a discussion of the procedures by top management. As a result, the top management discussed the procedures. There is a need of investigation. We need to investigate.

3. Avoid Excessive Noun Clustering Inadequate tax counselor interviewing desk space makes counseling difficult. Inadequate space at the interviewing desk makes counseling difficult for the tax counselor. Our soviet trunk plant contract price does not include a margin for foreign exchange rate transaction risks. Our contract price for soviet trunk plant does not include the amount for risks caused by fluctuations in the foreign exchange rates.

4. Avoid Redundancy The necessary work for proper preservation of the grinders is being done which consists of cleaning, greasing and painting and any other work that might be found necessary for the protection of the grinders. Grinders are being cleaned, greased and painted so that we can preserve them. Based on past records it will not be unnecessary at this juncture to place a limit on the number of tickets one individual may purchase. The past record suggests that we need to limit the number of tickets that one person may buy.

5. Avoid Circumlocution We solicit any recommendation that you wish to make and you may rest assured that any recommendations will be given our careful consideration as to the utilization there of. Please give your suggestions. We would carefully consider them.

6. Avoid Ambiguity He noticed a large stain in the rug that was right in the centre. He noticed a large stain in the centre of the rug. You can call your mother in London and tell her all about Peter's taking you out to dinner for just sixty cents. For just sixty cents you can call your mother in London and tell her all about Peter's taking you out to dinner.

7. Avoid Jargon The responsibility of a person involved in pedagogical pursuits is to impart knowledge to those sent to him for instruction. The job of a teacher is to teach his students.

8. Avoid Clich�s The report discusses threadbare the problem of air pollution in India. The report discusses the problem of air pollution in India in detail. The engineers left no stones unturned, sparing no efforts to construct the bridge in time. The engineers worked very hard to construct the bridge in time.

9. Use Emphatic Word Order He is aware that he should uphold the authority to fire workers of his supervisors who disobey orders whenever possible as a management representative. He, as a management representative, is aware that he should uphold the authority of his supervisors to fire workers who disobey orders. We feel we are missing some patients and therefore losing revenues by using this system. We feel that by using this system we are missing some patients and therefore losing revenues.

10. Use Parallel Construction This book makes a good text for college students, and businessmen find it even more useful for enlarging their knowledge of accounting. This book is good as a college text and even better, as means of enlarging their knowledge of accountancy, for businessmen.

11. Split the Breathless Sentences In this schedule are listed the events that will take place during the next month and also the time and venue so that you can decide before and whether you will like to take part in any event and if so, inform the concerned organizer who will enter your name in a list which he maintains for the purpose. We are enclosing the next month�s event. If interested, kindly inform the concerned organizer.