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段落展开那点事儿 贺 旭阳

段落展开那点事儿 贺 旭阳. 第一 件事儿：中间段落主题句要求 第二 件 事儿： 论证 第三件 事儿 ：段落常用的连接词 第四件 事儿 ： 论证注意 事项 第五件事儿：背诵问题. 第一件 事儿：中间段落主题句要求 1. 陈述句 2. 统领全文 3. 简单粗暴. 第二件事儿： 论证. 主题句 + 解释（看情况） + 举例 + 解释例子 + 反面论证（看情况） 我认为 … 因为 … 比如 … 你看 … 所以 … 如果不这样呢 ….

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段落展开那点事儿 贺 旭阳

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  1. 段落展开那点事儿 贺旭阳

  2. 第一件事儿：中间段落主题句要求 第二件事儿：论证 第三件事儿：段落常用的连接词 第四件事儿：论证注意事项 第五件事儿：背诵问题

  3. 第一件事儿：中间段落主题句要求 1.陈述句 2.统领全文 3.简单粗暴

  4. 第二件事儿：论证 主题句+解释（看情况）+举例+解释例子+反面论证（看情况） 我认为…因为…比如…你看…所以…如果不这样呢…

  5. Success is because of hard work, luck has nothing to do with success. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. Admittedly, hard work plays an indispensable role in contributing to success. Only by working hard, can people get familiar with concepts, form insightful understanding and appreciation in expertise,and master proficient control of a particular knack.As pointed out in the book: outliers: the story of success written by MalcomnGladwell, a best-selling writer, successful celebrities like Bill Gates or other football players has completed 10000 hours training before being an expert in related fields.It is diligence and persistent practice rather than other factors that lead to their success. Without hard work, we could not imagine Lang Lang playing wonderful piano music, we could not imagine Barcelona football club obtaining six champion titles in one season, and we could not imagine John Nash establishing Nash equilibrium that won him Nobel Prize.

  6. 段落展开的一个基本思路。 What? Why? How? Without?（反面论证） Success is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success. The best way to improve the quality of education is to increase teachers’ salaries. It is more important for teachers’ to help students to gain confidence than teach specific knowledge.

  7. Increasing teachers’ salaries definitely serves as an effectively means by which we can improve the quality of education. Generally speaking, higher salaries not only satisfy basic needs but also contribute to higher level life style. With basic and spiritual needs satisfied, they tend to be more concentrated to improve teaching methods, actively communicate with students, patiently answer students’ questions, earnestly address students’ emotional problems. Therefore, as expected, the quality of education can be enhanced. If teachers salaries were not being raised, they might resort to doing part-time, which could possibly lead to an unsatisfactory teaching performance.

  8. The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. • Compared with people who live in urban areas, the people who live in rural areas can take better care of their families. • A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time. • Books have more influence on society than television. • More and more people are spending money on their pets, even though there can be other good ways to spend money.

  9. 如何论证？ 归根结底，就是brainstorming的一个过程, 把一个事情的前因后果缕清楚。多问What? Why? How? Without?多和自己的朋友讨论，一定会有收获。

  10. 论证段落常用连接词(transitions) 表原因：because, since, as, for because of, as a result of, result from, due to 表结果：so, thus, therefore, consequently, accordingly, which 表让步: although, though, even though, even if, despite, in spite of, notwithstanding 表转折：However, nevertheless, nonetheless, while, but 表并列：and, on one hand, on the other hand, not only but also, either or, additionally, in addition, furthermore 表对比：rather than, on the contrary, compared to, compared with, in contrast 表反面：without, if there was no… 举例：for instance/example, take…as an example, an example of my friend, Tom, can effectively illustrate the point here.

  11. 段落展开注意事项： 1.人称的使用： 2.单复数 3.时态： 4.政治军事宗教

  12. 政治军事 Improving schools is the most important factor in the successful development of a country military

  13. 宗教 Should the government support artists or artists support themselves? 梵高的例子； His reputation was confirmed after his death; today, his name was beside the God in artists' hearts

  14. 背诵的问题： 背诵有没有用？ 用处有多大？ 那该怎么办？

  15. “婚是我要离的 没有第三者 没有婆媳不和 不牵扯财务问题 不是悲情狗血剧 和平分手 换一种方式相处 对孩子来说 我们仍然是一家人 谢谢@一号立井 用爱和理智包容这一切 感恩 p.s支持@嫣然天使基金 不会停 内什么 不会出家”

  16. 王菲体 “…是我...，没有...，没有...，不...，不...，谢谢...，感恩p.s....不会停 内什么 不会....”

  17. 单身是我选择的 没有性格缺陷 没有情感阴影 不牵扯性取向问题 不是揪心虐恋剧 不恋爱是给自己更多时间去等待 对现在而言 相遇仍然需要缘分 谢谢父母用爱和理解包容这一切 p.s寻找真爱不会停 内什么 不是眼光高 托福是我要考的 没有人强迫我 没有想不开 不牵扯找不到工作问题 不是没有想过考不到好成绩 我决定 换一种方式和自己过不去 对于父母来说 还是想我滚远点 谢谢@家人 用爱和理智支持我决定的一切 感恩 p.s坚持梦想 不会停 内什么 不会放弃 ！

  18. Play an important role in Bring great benefits to Is important for somebody to do something Show great influence on something Regard each failure as a stimulus to further efforts

  19. Thank you!

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