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Writing is not scary. How might one use writing in the career you are researching? . Perfecting our Writing. Rules for Writing Real Good. Definition. Part of Speech. THESIS. Picture. Sentence. How does ________ career impact society?. Essential Question? .
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Writing is not scary How might one use writing in the career you are researching?
Perfecting our Writing Rules for Writing Real Good
Definition Part of Speech THESIS Picture Sentence
How does ________ career impact society? Essential Question?
A. _____________ career positively impacts society • B. _____________ career negatively impacts society • C. _____________ career positively impacts society, despite some of the negative impressions Answer the EQ
Focus your research • Evolution and/or history • Famous people • Current practices • Future outlook At least 4 subtopics
HOMEWORK 30 Rows and 5 sources due Friday Tomorrow: computer lab; you must have a total of 15 rows and 3 sources by the end of class tomorrow Thursday: media center; you must have at LEAST 25 rows and 4 sources by the end of class Thursday
1. evolution/history of teaching • 2. Current pedagogy and practices in education • 3. famous teachers • 4. Where education is headed: the future. Teaching career positively impacts society. Career: Teaching
The teaching profession positively impacts society because all other professions depend on teachers. By looking at the evolution of teaching, the current pedagogical practices, prominent figures in the profession, and the projected future of education, one clearly comes to appreciate how much society depends on teachers. Thesis puts it together
Parallelism And the Research Process
Faulty A police officer must uphold the law by patrolling the streets, controlling traffic, catching criminals, and arresting law-breakers. A police officer must uphold the law by patrolling the streets, controlling traffic, catch criminals, and arresting law-breakers. Writing Handbook p. 22
A police officer has many duties. • Different? • Improve? Why use parallel structure?
What Is Parallelism? • Repeating grammatical structures • Parallel Words: • Hot, tired and cranky I stood out in the sun waiting for my bus. (adjectives) • Parallel Phrases: • Jerome loves to swim laps, ride bikes, and jump hurdles. (infinitive phrases) • Parallel Clauses: • First we had to find the hotel. Then we had to find our friends.
Parallel Words: • He has called together legislative bodies at places unusual, uncomfortable and distant from the depository of their public records . • (adjectives) • Parallel Phrases: • He has constrained our fellow citizens taken captive on the high seas to bear arms against their country, to become the executioners of their friend and brethren, or to fall themselves by their hands. • (infinitive phrases) • Parallel Clauses: • The harder the conflict, the more glorious the triumph. • (is finite verb clause) You try
The teaching profession positively impacts society because all other professions depend on teachers. By looking at the evolution of teaching, the current pedagogical practices, prominent figures in the profession, and the projected future of education, one clearly comes to appreciate how much society depends on teachers. Fine
The teaching profession positively impacts society because all other professions depend on teachers. By looking at the constant evolution, current pedagogy, prominent figures, and projected future, one clearly comes to appreciate how much society depends on teachers. Great (parallel)
Revisit and revise your paper thesis Write it on the index card