Pronoun-Antecedent Agreement and Transitions

1. Pronoun-Antecedent Agreementand Transitions Ms. LoganEnglish I

2. Q: Where is the pronoun? If a person wants to succeed in corporate life, you have to know the rules of the game. Q: Where is the antecedent? They MUST agree with each other. This writer just switched from third person to second person.

3. INCORRECT: If a person wants to succeed in corporate life, you have to know the rules of the game. you CORRECT 2nd PERSON: If ____________ want to succeed in corporate life, ________ have to know the rules of the game. you a person CORRECT 3rd PERSON: If ____________ wants to succeed in corporate life, ____________ has to know the rules of the game. he or she

4. If anybody wants to succeed in corporate life, they have to know the rules of the game. Circle the pronoun and its corresponding antecedent. What’s the problem with them? *Hint: MOST OF YOU ARE VERY GUILTY OF THIS!

5. That student does not have his shirt tucked in, do you know their name?

6. That student does not have his shirt tucked in, do you know his name?

7. Now, since you have done so well on pronoun-antecedent agreement, we will transition into transitions! (Even though there is a pronoun-antecedent error in this statement.)

8. “Basically, transitions provide the reader with directions for how to piece together your ideas into a logically coherent argument. Transitions are not just verbal decorations that embellish your paper by making it sound or read better. They are words with particular meanings that tell the reader to think and react in a particular way to your ideas. In providing the reader with these important cues, transitions help readers understand the logic of how your ideas fit together” (The Writing Center 2010).

9. Transitions between sections—Particularly in longer works, it may be necessary to include transitional paragraphs that summarize for the reader the information just covered and specify the relevance of this information to the discussion in the following section. Transitions between paragraphs—If you have done a good job of arranging paragraphs so that the content of one leads logically to the next, the transition will highlight a relationship that already exists by summarizing the previous paragraph and suggesting something of the content of the paragraph that follows. A transition between paragraphs can be a word or two (however, for example, similarly), a phrase, or a sentence. Transitions can be at the end of the first paragraph, at the beginning of the second paragraph, or in both places. Transitions within paragraphs—As with transitions between sections and paragraphs, transitions within paragraphs act as cues by helping readers to anticipate what is coming before they read it. Within paragraphs, transitions tend to be single words or short phrases.

11. Questions to ask: • What relationship am I trying to portray between paragraphs? • Do I need a strong transition word? • Have I organized my information correctly? • Do my ideas relate to each other in logical format?

12. Works Cited "Transitions." - The Writing Center at UNC Chapel Hill. 2010. Web. 26 Apr. 2012. <http://writingcenter.unc.edu/resources/handouts-demos/writing-the-paper/transitions>.