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Okaloosa Writes. Learning Objectives. Participants will close read the Argumentative Writing prompt, sources, and rubric Participants will text mark student anchor papers . Success Criteria ELA and Social Studies teachers will collaboratively score Okaloosa Writes essays .
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Learning Objectives • Participants will close read the Argumentative Writing prompt, sources, and rubric • Participants will text mark student anchor papers • Success Criteria • ELA and Social Studies teachers will collaboratively score Okaloosa Writes essays
Review the Middle School Prompt Should bottled water be banned? Cite evidence from both the article, “Is Bottled Water Really Better?” and the graphs to support your claim.
A Closer Look at the Prompt Should bottled water be banned? Cite evidence from both the article, “Is Bottled Water Really Better?” and graphs to support your claim. What is the prompt asking? TURN AND TALK What is the prompt asking of students?
A Closer Look at the Sources ACTIVITY Close Read Both Sources and Fill Out the Graphic Organizer, Handout #3A
Possible Answers This column shows support FOR banning bottled water This column shows support AGAINST banning bottled water
The Rubric Introduction and Claim Developing an Argument with Support Organization Vocabulary Tone and Conventions Conclusion
A Closer Look at the Rubric Close Read the Rubric and Complete Handout #2A to Determine How the Expectations Progress
A Closer Look at the Rubric Look at Each Category of the Rubric and Determine Skills Needed for Scores
A Closer Look at the Rubric Does BOTH: Writes an Intro AND Makes a Claim Does NOT Provide an Intro Naming Topic Does ONE: Writes Intro OR Makes Claim Does BOTHPLUS Answers “So What? Why?”
A Closer Look at the Rubric GOOD START Developing Support; ADEQUATE Explanations NO Relevant Facts Mentions, Does Not Develop Claim; LIMITED Explanations Develops Claim THROUGH Support; MEANINGFUL Explanations
A Closer Look at the Rubric Logical Pattern of Organization; NEED Transitions WITHIN Paragraphs SIMPLE Sentences; FEW Transitions; NO Paragraphing Logical Pattern of Organization; FEW Transitions Clear AND Effective Organization Complex Sentences AND Internal Transitions
A Closer Look at the Rubric NO Tier II/Tier III Vocabulary Tier II and Tier III Vocabulary are EVIDENT SOME Tier II/Tier III Vocabulary Sufficient, Appropriate Tier II and Tier III Vocabulary THROUGHOUT
A Closer Look at the Rubric GOOD START Towards Strong Conclusion that Explains how Evidence Supports the Claim; ADEQUATELY Explains Why It Matters NO Conclusion or Restates Claim Conclusion Restates the Claim ANDATTEMPTS to Explain Why it Matters STRONG Conclusion that Explains how Evidence Supports the Claim; EFFECTIVELY Explains Why It Matters
Text Marking • Grading argumentative writing can be a challenge. Consider text marking: • Introductory Statement= I • Opposing Claim=O • Claim=C • Support (evidence)=S • Explanation (commentary)= E
Score Anchor Papers Score Point 2.5 What Makes this Essay a 2.5?
How Did You Get That? • Add the Points from Each Category • Divide by Six • If the Score is a Decimal, Confer With Scoring Partner and Decide to Round Up or Down
Score Anchor Papers Score Point 4 Score Essay 2
Score Anchor Papers Score Point 1 Score Essay 3
Score Anchor Papers Score Point 2 Score Essay 4
Score Anchor Papers Score Point 2.5 Score Essay 5