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Existentialism Paper Draft Issues. “No Exit” . This is a one act play. Short things are placed in quotes. Make sure to explain what is happening in the play. Refer to the audience on your assignment sheet. Proper Nouns are Capitalized…. Existentialism I Create Myself
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“No Exit” • This is a one act play. • Short things are placed in quotes. • Make sure to explain what is happening in the play. Refer to the audience on your assignment sheet.
Proper Nouns are Capitalized… • Existentialism • I Create Myself • Good Faith vs. Bad Faith • The Gaze • The President of the United States. • President Obama • President Bush… President Clinton
The Thesis… • The Gaze, one of Sartre six elements of Existentialism, is part of modern day society. • Good Faith vs. Bad Faith is part of our world, our country and our own community.
Body Examples… • Make sure they work. • Be detailed. Tell the story. Elaborate. • Don’t tell me that Inez used the Gaze. Show me how she did. Retell the story. • Don’t tell me that the President of The United States Creates Himself. Show me the actions he does that others follow. He votes. He says the pledge.
Proof & Citations… • YOU MUST HAVE FACTS to back up your opinion. • They must come from a reliable source. • You must give credit to that source… • According to People.com, Britney Spears… • Martin Fritz wrote, in an article on People.com… • Spear” (People.com).
Explaining the Quote… • DO NOT allow a quote to be it’s own independent sentence. • INTRODUCE IT… • Inez stated • People.com published • According to President Obama • Then explain how that quote supports your point.
Opening • Thesis. • What is Existentialism? • How did it begin? • What is your element and how does it work?
Topic Sentences… • You need them. • “Good Faith and Bad Faith were present during Britney Spears post partum rampage.” • “I Create Myself can be applied to my own school experience.” • “The Gaze is part of our Presidential Election Process.”
Conclusions… • Make them connect to specific ideas. • Make them connect back to content you already presented. • For Example: • Good Faith and Bad Faith- look at why we need Bad Faith or what would happen if people where not afraid of being caught. • I Create Myself- look at what would happen if no on followed another and we were only creating our own world.
Simple things… • NO FIRST PERSON – except for the personal paragraph. • PUNCTUATION- double check it! • FINAL FORMAT
Suggestions Good Faith vs. Bad Faith I Create Myself The Gaze