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Rule #11

Rule #11. A participial phrase at the beginning of a sentence must refer to the grammatical subject. (misplaced modifiers). Ha ha ha. Standing on the balcony, the ocean looked so beautiful . I glimpsed a rat sorting the recyclable materials .

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Rule #11

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  1. Rule #11 A participial phrase at the beginning of a sentence must refer to the grammatical subject. (misplaced modifiers)

  2. Ha haha Standing on the balcony, the ocean looked so beautiful. I glimpsed a rat sorting the recyclable materials. Flying overhead, I saw the geese pass by in a V-formation. Dressed in a diaper and drooling, grandpa read a book to his granddaughter. Covered with hot melted cheese, we ate the pizza. The body was discovered by a hunter with a gunshot wound.

  3. How to fix it • Find the subject • Does the participial phrase refer to the subject? • You usually just need to move things around. • In general, whenever you are using a modifier, place it as close as possible to the item you wish to modify in the sentence (even if it’s not the subject)

  4. Review • Read over rules 1 – 11 in Strunk and White (except rule 10) • If you are struggling with any rules, use NoRedInk.com and practice – you don’t need an assignment or quiz; you can just take practice quizzes: apostrophes, subject verb agreement, and commas, fragments, runs ons – these will help a lot. • For more review on colons and semi-colons, go to the following link and try the practice: • https://owl.english.purdue.edu/engagement/index.php?category_id=2&sub_category_id=1&article_id=44 • Test on Friday

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