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Objective: I can write a good introduction with a hook and thesis . Graded Essay Work #1. Topic : Men are better parents than women. Warmup : Agree, Disagree or It Depends Three (3) reasons why you think that way.
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Objective: I can write a good introduction with a hookand thesis. Graded Essay Work #1 Topic: Men are better parents than women. Warmup: Agree, Disagree or It Depends Three (3) reasons why you think that way
Jack Kerouac, a famous and respected author, took tons of drugs and used them to inspire some of his most brilliant work. [HOOK – Surprising Statement/ FAMOUS PERSON]. However, drugs like crack and meth have made plenty of people die broke, friendless and with severe pain from health problems. Not all drugs are bad for you. Some can ruin lives while some can help make them better.[THESIS – Opinion on topic in general] It all depends on the drug and the person. Example Introduction
Today is our first formally graded assignment. • We have practiced brainstorming techniques. • We have practiced outlining techniques. • We have practiced coming up with a hook and a thesis. • We have practiced writing anecdotal and surprising statement introductions. • … Now, it is time to put that practice into action! Graded Essay Work #1
At the end of today, you will give me: • A 5-10 minute brainstorm using one of our techniques from Week 1 • A 10-15 minute outline of your entire essay in Roman Numeral or Graphic Organizer style. • Do this free-hand style on loose-leaf. It’s practice for writing quick outlines before timed tests! You can look at the handout to remind yourself what it looks like • A 20 minute written introduction in anecdotal or surprising statement style. Your thesis sentence MUST be underlined. • Use any extra time to check and revise your work to make sure it is your best effort! Graded Essay Work #1