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Show and tell : which is which ?

Show and tell : which is which ?. He was nervously waiting The man was scared A frost had hardened the ground underfoot . The night was cold He backed away as if industrial machinery was moving towards him The man tapped his foot relentlessly.

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Show and tell : which is which ?

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  1. Show and tell: whichiswhich? • He wasnervouslywaiting • Themanwasscared • A frosthadhardenedthegroundunderfoot. • Thenightwascold • He backedaway as if industrial machinerywasmovingtowardshim • Themantappedhisfootrelentlessly

  2. Checklist: has yourpartner done thefollowing? • Establishedatmospherewiththedescription of theopeningscenes? • Createdinterest in thecharacters? • Includedoneortwoeventsthat ´hook´thereadersattention. • Isthereanelement of shock/mystery/somethingstrange? • Havetheyshownthereaderwhatis happening? • Has dialogue beenusedeffectively? (optional) Can youthink of anythingelse?

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