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Phoenix Rising Jennifer Ha November. 11, 2010. can live in the same habitat yet not compete for resources. SRUGGLES:. Muncie thinks Nyle doesn’t like her. Muncie doesn’t like evacuees. Ezra feels guilty about his Dad. Nyle tells him to fly away and start over, just like the Phoenix.
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Phoenix Rising Jennifer Ha November. 11, 2010 can live in the same habitat yet not compete for resources SRUGGLES: Muncie thinks Nyle doesn’t like her. Muncie doesn’t like evacuees. Ezra feels guilty about his Dad. Nyle tells him to fly away and start over, just like the Phoenix MORE TENSION: The Dying room: Nyle’s mum and grandfather both died there. Now Ezra and Mrs. Trent are living there. PROBLEM: Nyle and Gran are keeping a secret: they are giving shelter to evacuees, Mrs. Trent & Ezra RISK & DANGER: Ripley&his dog: like trouble SOLUTION: Nyle learned to get to know people before it’s too late and to live her life to the fullest. BEGINNING (THE Goal): *Nyle’s suffer from a radiation leak at the local nuclear power plant Nyle is learning how to take care of people in need. She is warming up to Ezra. Nyle truly cares about Ezra and relies on him. Everything is about Ezra. EXPOSITION: Nyle: 13 years old girl; narrator Muncie: 13 years old girl; short; afraid Ripley: 15-year old boy; mean; his dog, Tyruskilled the sheep *Gran: Nyle lives with grandmother *Ezra & Mrs. Trent:had to leave their home and are living with Nyle and Gran END: Ezra’s death made Nyle want to let more people know about possible accidents like the one at Cookshire. (TRANSFORMATION) x
STORY TREE STONE: Writes a song for her. She gives it to her boyfriend to listen to. STONE: Makes her a lunch and gives her a plastic rose. PROBLEM: Howie is afraid to tell his close friend that he wants to be more than friends. She has a boyfriend. SOLUTION: Tells her how he feels. Turns out, she didn’t know he wanted to be more than friends. PUT YOUR CHARACTER UP A TREE. THROW STONES AT HIM. GET HIM DOWN.