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Explore how banning sugary drinks like Mountain Dew in schools can improve student health, reduce bullying, and enhance academic performance. This essay presents compelling arguments for implementing such policies.

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  1. Conclusions: An Introduction

  2. What’s the Point? • Transition back to their daily lives • From the world of the essay/topic BACK to the real world • Show why all your analysis and information should matter to them after they put the paper down. Thesis Importance of topic in the world

  3. Conclusion: In Two Parts • The concluding paragraph typically has two parts: 1. The summary statement 1-2 sentences which restate the thesis in a fresh way 2. The clincher Final thought which should create a lasting impression on the reader.

  4. Visual Representation Summary Statement Clincher (not poop) CALL TO ACTION

  5. Examples Thesis Statement: Many Americans are buying the Toyota Corolla because of its competitive price, fuel economy, and high resale value. Summary Statement: Reasonable pricing, high miles per gallon, and an attractive resale value have all contributed to the popularity of the Toyota Corolla in today's market.

  6. Example 2 Thesis: The AHS administration can help reduce issues caused by poor student diets by banning the sale of Mountain Dew. Summary Statement: While there are many potential solutions to the bullying & harrassment caused by poor student diets, the easiest and most feasible is to stop the sale of Mountain Dew.

  7. Clincher Examples • Clinchers: Return to idea from beginning of essay and call to action • Complete the anecdote/story • Make a prediction/recommendation based on statistics, • Use a new quote to refer back to an old quote • END WITH SOME FORM OF CALL TO ACTION (WHAT SHOULD EVERYBODY GET UP & DO!?

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