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Unit 4: data commentary. P80: Location Elements and Summaries Table 6 and 7, present tense, both active and passive P81, informative. To be used as alternative. P82: Language Focus: Verbs in Indicative and Informative summaries P83, Table 8 P82: Language Focus: Linking as-Clauses
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Unit 4: data commentary • P80: Location Elements and Summaries • Table 6 and 7, present tense, both active and passive • P81, informative. To be used as alternative. • P82: Language Focus: Verbs in Indicative and Informative summaries • P83, Table 8 • P82: Language Focus: Linking as-Clauses • P83: main standard uses • HW: p84, task 4
Unit 4: data commentary • P85: Highlighting Statements • P86: Qualifications and Strength of Claim • Remember the examples in p86-87 • P88: weaker verbs • HW: p88, task 6 • P89: combined qualifications • HW: p90, task 7
Unit 4: data commentary • P90: Organization • major claims are followed by minor claims • Do NOT simply repeat the numbers in the tables • Use comparison: more, fewer, 21% more/less, twice, 3.5-fold increase… • P97: dealing with ‘problems’: remember the phrases • HW: write ‘Results’ for the table in next slide
6-min high-intensity cycling performed every hr for 16 hr. Muscle biopsy data
Dealing with graphs • P99: follow the same principles as with tables • But with different vocabularies • P101: Language Focus: Referring to Lines on Graphs
Common mistakes • 找出data重點 • 圖表中Data 呈現的順序 • 不要太刻意使用 however, in addition, … • 清楚說明變數 • 少用it, they, ; 直接寫出 glucose, lactate, and pyruvate… • Grammar • were significantly decreased, showed a significant decrease • There was no significant difference after exercise…
Tennis skill test results performed before and after treatment 2 treatments: placebo or HCO3
measured before and after treatment 2 treatments: placebo or HMB