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What is a run-on? . A run-on is a group of two sentences that do not have any punctuation separating them. I like school it is fun. (Incorrect). What is a comma splice? . A comma splice is like a run-on, except the two sentences are joined with a comma. I like school, it is fun. (Incorrect).
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A run-on is a group of two sentences that do not have any punctuation separating them. • I like school it is fun. (Incorrect)
A comma splice is like a run-on, except the two sentences are joined with a comma. • I like school, it is fun. (Incorrect)
Three options: 1. Use a period to separate the sentences. 2. Use short joining words and a comma to combine the two sentences. 3. Use a semi-colon with long joining words to combine the two sentences.
1. Use a period. • I like school. It is fun.
2. Use short joining words and a comma to combine the two sentences. • If you do not struggle with comma splice or run on errors, you can use techniques 2 and 3 to create sentence variety in your writing to make your writing more interesting.
Short joining words (compound sentence with a conjunction) Rule: Two complete related sentences can be joined by a comma and a short joining word. and, for, but, nor, so, yet, or I like school, and it is fun.
We can think of sentences like a pattern or formula. I like school, and it is fun. (sentence), short joiner(sentence).
3. Semi-colon with a long joiner. Rule: Long joining words are preceded by a semicolon (;) and followed by a comma (,). Long Joiners: also, anyhow, anyway, besides, consequently, finally, furthermore, however, instead, meanwhile, moreover, nevertheless, next, otherwise, still, then, therefore, thus. I like school; moreover, it is fun.
Once again, we can think of this rule as a pattern or formula. • I like school; moreover, it is fun. (sentence); long joiner, (sentence).
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