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L.O write a story setting using prepositional openers. Setting description What’s wrong with this?. She saw tall trees covered in snow. She saw icicles dangling from long branches. She saw soft snowflakes swirling around her. She saw a dark, grey sky above the forest.
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Setting descriptionWhat’s wrong with this? • She saw tall trees covered in snow. She saw icicles dangling from long branches. She saw soft snowflakes swirling around her. She saw a dark, grey sky above the forest.
LO. Setting description with prepositional openers • As Lucy stepped outside the wardrobe, she gasped in amazement. In front of her lay the most enchanting and beautiful land she had ever seen. Above her, spidery branches glistened with dagger-sharp icicles. Towering trees were laden with a thick coat of snow. In the distance, a lamp flickered with a golden glow, which lit up the surrounding blanket of snow.
Success criteria • All punctuation in place • Handwriting neat and easy to read. • Lots of work written.