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Argumentative Essay Workshop. Western Literature. Essay Workshop Instructions. If you do not have your completed rough draft today, please sit away from everyone else and complete your rough draft.
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Argumentative Essay Workshop Western Literature
Essay Workshop Instructions If you do not have your completed rough draft today, please sit away from everyone else and complete your rough draft. • On your essay, write what kind of feedback you are looking for. Are you struggling with any aspect of the essay? • For this workshop, we will be rotating one essay clockwise around the circle after a couple rounds. • Please take this workshop seriously and provide the best feedback you can. • If you discover any typos or mistakes during this workshop, please correct as needed.
ROTATE! Hand over your essay to the person next to you in a clockwise circle.
ROUND ONE: Thesis Statement • STEP ONE: Read the essay. • STEP TWO: Circle his or her thesis statement. • STEP THREE: Write “yes” or “no” by the thesis statement with additional feedback to answer the questions: • Does the thesis statement provide a clear main claim or position for the paper? • Do you get an overview of the paper? Do you know what to expect?
ROUND TWO: Introduction • STEP ONE: Read the entire essay. • STEP TWO: Underline the hook and label what type he or she uses (i.e. anecdote, quote, statistic, scene, etc.) in RED. • STEP THREE: Answer the following question at the top of his or her essay: • Is the hook effective? How can he or she make it better? Offer suggestions. • Does he or she transition from the hook to the context and into the thesis statement smoothly?
ROTATE! Hand over your essay to the person next to you in a clockwise circle.
ROUND THREE: Claims • STEP ONE: Read the essay. • STEP TWO: Underline and label each claim in green. • STEP THREE: Answer the following question next to each claim: • Does each claim pass the “CRISP” test? • Contestable • Reasonable • Interpretative • Significant • Precise
ROUND FOUR: Evidence • STEP ONE: Read the essay. • STEP TWO: Complete the following tasks: • Underline any instances of evidence in yellow. • Circle any in-text citations. • STEP THREE: Answer the following questions on his or her essay: • Does the evidence pass the CRAAP test? • Does the essay use SPARTA evidence? • Does the writer cite sources correctly?
ROTATE! Hand over your essay to the person next to you in a clockwise circle.
ROUND FIVE: Commentary • STEP ONE: Read the essay and pay attention to claims and evidence. • STEP TWO: Complete the following tasks: • Underline any instances of commentary in blue. • STEP THREE: FOR EACH PIECE OF EVIDENCE, examine if the commentary connects the evidence to prove the claim. Write “yes” or “no” by each piece of evidence.
ROUND SIX: Conclusion • STEP ONE: Read the entire essay. • STEP TWO: Circle the “clincher” that applies to the world at large. If they do not have a “clincher”, then please note that on his or her essay. • STEP THREE: Answer the following questions as the bottom of the essay: • Did the author prove his or her thesis throughout the paper. Why or why not?
ROTATE! Hand over your essay to the person next to you in a clockwise circle.
ROUND SEVEN: MECHANICS • STEP ONE: Read the essay carefully. • STEP TWO: Edit the essay for capitalization, spelling, punctuation, word choice, and typos. • STEP THREE: Does the paper follows MLA format? (Times New Roman, double-spaced, 1” margins, header, heading) • STEP FOUR: Provide overall suggestions.
Unit Review • Burkean Parlor • Components of an Argumentative Essay (Introduction, Body Paragraphs, Conclusion) • Hooks • Thesis Statement • Effective Claims (Contestable, Reasonable, Interpretative, Significant, Precise) • Quality of Evidence (Sufficient, Precise, Accurate, Representative, Trustworthy, Authoritative) • Source Credibility (Currency, Relevance, Accuracy, Authority, Purpose) • In-Text Citations • Punctuation (Comma, Colon, Ellipsis) • MLA Format (Header vs. Heading)
Homework • Your final draft packet is due on Friday. This packet should include: • 1. Self-Evaluated Rubric • 2. Pre-Writing Stage Organizer • 3. Revised Rough Draft • 4. Typed Final Draft