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Getting Published in Biomedical Journals Advice for Submitting Manuscript to Scientific Journals. Kurt H. Albertine, Ph.D. Editor-in-Chief, The Anatomical Record. The Bottom Lines. Excite the reviewer. Why?. She/he wants your manuscript published. Excite readers. Why?.
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Getting Published in Biomedical JournalsAdvice for Submitting Manuscript to Scientific Journals Kurt H. Albertine, Ph.D. Editor-in-Chief, The Anatomical Record
The Bottom Lines • Excite the reviewer • Why? • She/he wants your manuscript published • Excite readers • Why? • They want to read your published paper
What Do Editors Look For? • Excitement, such as • Novelty • New discovery • More thorough insight • Innovation • New methods, reagents, transgenic mouse • Substantive, clear (understandable) results • Scientific controversy ARCOVER2008 • NOT scientist controversy!
Expectations About Manuscripts - 1 • Reviewers and readers • Like an interesting story that • Advances the field • Revolves around the hypothesis or question • Conclusion that answers the hypothesis or question
A Good Story… Not! Starts here This way?
Expectations About Manuscripts - 2 • Reviewers and readers • Like to read interesting stories • Advances the field substantively • Revolves around the hypothesis or question • Conclusion that answers the hypothesis or question • Results are placed in context of the field • Impact/value to the field
Expectations About Manuscripts - 3 • Reviewers and readers expect • Clear writing • Good organization • Good English grammar
How Does an Author Meet Expectations About Manuscripts? • Clearly state the • Hypothesis • Or question • Or controversy
Publishable Unit • Before writing, • Think: what will make a publishable unit? • Then write the publishable unit to sell it • Make it appealing to read
Introduction Discussion Methods & Results One Theme Focus: Hypothesis
Introduction Methods Results Discussion Funnel Analogy Hypothesis
Please, not this! Reviewers’ “Hell”, MC Escher, Italian Period, 1935 (copy after H Bosch)
Nuts and Bolts of Clear Writing • Without holes! • Chose words carefully • Write short sentences • Avoid modifying words • Adjectives and adverbs • One idea per paragraph • Write what you mean
Example… • "I'm disinclined to acquiesce to your request… …improvement • “No" • Captain Barbossa to Elizabeth Swann • * Pirates of the Caribbean - The Curse of the Black Pearl, 2003
Definition of Clear Writing OK to start-out fuzzy • “Clear writing is writing that is incapable of being misunderstood” * • Quintilian, a Roman rhetoritician, who lived in the first century A.D. Crisp finish * Zeiger. Essentials of Writing Biomedical Research Papers. 2004
Punctuation • “Standards of punctuation in general…are approaching the point of illiteracy; self-justified philistines.”1 • By a show of hands… • how many of you write never-ending sentences that never end? 1 Truss. Eats, Shoots & Leaves. 2004
Writing Clearly • Goals • Unambiguous writing • Creates the least confusion • Logical story • e.g., storyline • Clear, informative figures and tables • Results are obvious • Thoughtful discussion • Focused on importance and relevance
All of the elements are present, but where is the storyline? Please, not this, either! Authors’ “Relativity”, MC Escher, Back in Holland, 1941-54
Introduction Discussion Methods & Results Writing Tense Hypothesis Present tense Present tense Past tense
A Writing Strategy • Start with the easy parts • Methods and Results • They are done! • Discussion • Interpret the results and place them in context of the field (what do they mean?) • Introduction • Copy/paste to identify the topic, what is known, what is unknown • Abstract • Copy/paste topic sentences
Why Strive to Write Clearly? • “…science is not data. Data are the raw material of science. It is what you do with the data that is science – the interpretation you make, the story you tell.” Zeiger. Essentials of Writing Biomedical Research Papers. pg 1, 2004