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Welcome! . English 9. Today’s Agenda. It’s a writing day! Enriching your writing 2 nd draft, peer review Polishing your writing. Enriching your writing. Really consider your topic. Make sure you have a clear main idea. Consider what you’ve developed so far.
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Welcome! English 9
Today’s Agenda • It’s a writing day! • Enriching your writing • 2nd draft, peer review • Polishing your writing Read Write Speak Listen
Enriching your writing • Really consider your topic. Make sure you have a clear main idea. • Consider what you’ve developed so far. • If it doesn’t support your main idea, cut it. • If it does support your main idea, make sure you developed the details. Read Write Speak Listen
Enriching your writing • Really consider your audience. • If you could have anybody in the world read what you’ve written, who would it be? • Be as specific as possible. • As you are writing, try to imagine who your audience would react to what you have to say and how you are saying it. Read Write Speak Listen
Enriching your writing • Characters • Your story probably includes “characters” (at the very least, you). • Use descriptors to show the reader what your characters are like. • Use dialogue to reveal their personality. Read Write Speak Listen
Polishing your writing • Economize – read through what you’ve written an eliminate words that are working for you (I guess, in my opinion, I’m not sure about, I don’t know). Also, prune away writing that is circular or indirect. • Make sure you are using the strongest verbs you can. “He dashed home” communicates more than “He went home.” Read Write Speak Listen
Polishing your writing • Agreement – make sure your sentences agree in number, time, tense, and gender. • Transition – use the list of transition and linking words to move smoothly from one thought to the next. Read Write Speak Listen
Today • If you are not done with your first draft, work on that. • If you are done with your first draft, work on the self-assessment. • If you are done with both, work on your second draft. • If you are done with your second draft, find someone to peer review your paper. Read Write Speak Listen
Homework • Read your choice book • Work on your reading log. • Final draft of your essay is due on Tuesday January 18, 2011. There won’t be more class time to work on the paper. Read Write Speak Listen
Bye! • Come back tomorrow! Read Write Speak Listen